DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Octov]

This is okay for a Ludum Dare game. It could use better graphics and polish.

[The witch n the alchemist]

This is not a game, it is a collection of drawings. There should be an English translation.

[Crying Screaming 2]

This game needs better voice acting, better graphics, check points, fun, and more content.

[Red's Venture]

A very short and simple game. It needs more content, better graphics, fun, and much more polish.

[Greylight: Demo]

This is a demo. Next time, submit a complete game. You should correct the spelling errors in your text.

[Sword of Hope: The forest]

This feels like a demo. You should only submit working, finished games. Improve the graphics, add content, and polish.

[RPG Man]

You must include voices, improve the graphics and gameplay. A health meter would be a good idea.

[Super magia kart pc]

There should be an English translation, include sound, improve graphics, controls, and gameplay. This feels like a beta or demo.

[You vs WeeGee]

One battle, with two options, against Luigi. You put very little effort or work into this game and it shows.

[Super Urkel Yanma RPG]

This is a picture of Urkel not a game.