DoctorStrongbad's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[GMSU 05-16-18]

Poking fun of the news and current events will always be topical and funny. Your animation flows very well. Next time, you should start the comedy earlier. That will help get the viewers hooked right away. Nice work.

threebrain responds:

Yep! Totally. Gotta get right to the silly.

[Combat Nain: My First Ever Animation]

The animation is fine and the color works well enough. It could be smoother, have more action, and extra humor. However, this is nice for an animation from your first year in college. Congrats on winning an award at school.

[When Luffy plays as Mario]

The combination of Luffy, from One Piece, and the classic Super Mario Bros game comes together nicely. Luffy could be more detailed and have better movement animation. Not bad for a short parody movie.

DarkKingTube responds:

thank you. it was my first time with legs moments , i would work on it next time, don't forget it have pokemon as well :)

[A Social Justice Future ep1: #Problematic]

This is very interesting movie about a hot button topics, Social Justice and sexual identity. It uses humor to explain how those ideas could lead to trouble in the near future. The animation could be crisper, but this is a great first episode of your series.

[Ultra Demo]

The artwork and details are top notch. Good work on the special effects. The animation is nice, but there should be more of it. Once you make it longer and add more content it will feel complete.

[Meet my OC,Romilla]

Why did you decide to make a fusion of two different characters? You could of explained that better during the movie. The animation could be smoother and the art should be more detailed. Not bad for your first submission. Welcome to NewGrounds.

[The Noob Song 2]

Nice use of color and it is very long. The animation is choppy, and it should be much smoother. Adding more detail and style to your characters would help them stand out.

[Pets on Their Own | Confused Travolta Parody]

The parrot is drawn well and has some nice details. His hair was the best part. It needs more comedy and humor. Make it much longer with plenty of content and you will be on your way to success.

FunCartoons responds:

These are only a few frames from our cartoon. But I think these frames could be published as independent joke since the parrot looks like Travolta and Trump at the same time.
We are working on "pets on their own" cartoon. It tooks a lot of time as it's only a hobby and we make it in free time. =)
These frames will be present in first episode of "Pets on Their Own". =)
We will publish here this cartoons as soon as it will be ready.
You also may check some trailer on our YouTube, if you want. Our chanel name is "Peven Factory"

Thanks =)

[A QnA I did on my youtube channel]

The animation is okay and it was a long movie. Usually, people tend to make things short. Most people on NewGrounds like to see NewGrounds related things. Making this all about Youtube could rub people the wrong way. You have talent, and look forward to your next animation.

[Housemates - The Plant]

Jake got more than he bargained for when he got a plant from the store. The humor was a little silly, but was still funny. The plant was the star, but the car driving badly was nice comedy. Great job.

SwiggityWAVE responds:

Thanks man, been working on this for 2.5 months and kind of feel like it was worth it with all this positive feedback :D