DoctorStrongbad's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Quick Stix EP1]

Is this your first animation? If so, you did a nice job. The animation could flow better and the stick figures would look better fleshed out. The red blood really stands out.

bwilk89 responds:

Doctor Strongbad! Thanks man, I'm working on a sequel right now, this is my 3rd animation :) I'm a huge fan by the way, I love your stuff man from all the way back in 2007 :) <3

[Animation WIP]

The background is drawn and colored well. Animation is okay for the few seconds. However, it is just too short. A serious animation should be at least thirty seconds.

[Super Roommates episode 1]

The animation is jumpy, but that can be expected when the movie was made on and off over six months. The humor is also hit and miss. Next time, just work on one animation at a time. Your quality will really improve.

[Burnt Rice Meme]

This is not bad for a practice animation. The background is just too blank. There should be objects, or at least have it colored in. Nice work. By the way, I checked out Scotch on Youtube.

[Madness Combat: Retrdion (Kharkiv referenсe)]

A nice twist on Madness animations. Animation was fine, and there was lots of action. This is a nicely made parody.

kokkare responds:

thxe

[911]

It needs more animation and color. Jokes were okay, but could of used more of them and better humor. Making it longer and adding plenty of content would help it improve.

LoafOfMilk responds:

Its like three frames stretched to 9 seconds, and it got high-quality critique... very nice *shows ok hand emoji*

[Hunting MEKA]

That dark colors help to make it feel gloomy and lonely. The rain towards the end was a nice effect. Smooth animation and an interesting plot. Is this the beginning of a series?

tonysonartanim responds:

I hope it does! I definitely have more ideas for this setting!

[Cartoon- On and On music video in stickman version]

The outer space theme and aliens were done well. The stick figures should more detailed, but would look better fleshed out. The counting down clock was a nice touch.

RNHunter responds:

bro actually if you want full detailed than you cn watch on youtube titlee is when gamer help alien actually this is part 4 so not much detail is given

[Alternate Future of America]

This America alternative future has lots of creativity. Do you have a limited amount of colors to pick from? Yellow, Orange, and especially Gray are great colors. Gray always makes a good bad guy color. If you ever needs more ideas about the dialogue, let me know. Maybe I could help you with your next mapping animation?

[Alternate History of Europe WWII episode 1]

I think this is one of the first mapping videos that I have seen. I really enjoyed it, and the historical tie in was a great idea. If you use more different colors and improve the comments that that nation make, it would really improve.