DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Speed Ball! (Improved)]

An imitation of Pong that looks pretty much the same as the original. Gameplay is faster, but that is about it. Next time, use your own idea.

This was made on 5/7/06, and I am only the twelfth person to review it.

[A plane adventure]

You should always make a new flash for a submission. Using something from two years ago is already outdated. Next time try to use an original idea.

This was made on 5/6/06, and I am only the sixteenth person to review it.

[GGG's tutorial]

Tutorial that has tips for basic things. Graphics could be organized better and look clean. Different songs would help it be better.

This was made on 5/6/06, and I am only the seventh person to review it.

[Naruto Invaders]

Space Invaders but made with Naruto sprites. Nothing new or original in this flash. It could use a few musical track choices.

[Concatenate! v1]

Word games that needs much more work. Graphics could use more polish and shine. The dictionary just feels unfun. It should be based off skill instead of luck.

This was made on 5/5/06, and I am only the ninth person to review it.

[Pet Fishy]

Short flash about taking care of a fish. Graphics are decent enough. You need more comedy and different options to explore.

[How to Draw The Simpsons]

Drawing The Simpsons has never been easier. If you added more characters to draw than it would be a much better flash.

Aprime responds:

You're right!!

[The Institute v.2]

Resubmitted flash that has been reworked. This is not an original idea. Gameplay could use different levels and various enemies to fight. Graphics need more colors than just red.

This was made on 5/3/06, and I am only the seventh person to review it.

[Mystery on the High Seas]

This feels like a demo. Graphics need more attention to detail. Gameplay needs action and fun. Your music should sound clearer.

This was made on 9/23/05, and I am only the fourteenth person to review it.

[Street Gas Demo]

Just another demo submitted that needs work. Adding better graphics, more car choices, and goals to achieve should be your first steps.