DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Relax-a-Tron]

It's a car with a background of a sky. There is no content, action, or goal to accomplish. Here is an idea, why not have people slowly start to approach the car. That way you could drive away, or run them over for fun.

[Plane(demo version)]

The plane flies very slow and it should have better moveability. If you want to make it slow to increase the difficulty that is fair, but the animation needs to be slicker. I made it all the way to the end. Next time, submit a complete game.

[Penguin Adventure!]

The penguin looks okay but moves so slowly. You should make your animation with more frames, so it looks so smooth. This is way too short. It should be longer and more scenes to view.

[Born To Kill]

The black and white with a little red art style was a bad idea. You really need to include bright and vivid colors. You should have access to different weapons and attacks.

[Windows NAB]

If you are going to make a windows parody, you show make the graphics match up. This looks nothing like a windows program. You should sharpen your skills and work on your attention to detail.

[Pace:In Search of Fortune]

This reminds me of the NES classic Marble Madness. The movement can take a bit to get the feel for it. Graphics looks good and constant moving is sharp.

[Pac pic stick]

This game is all about using the 40 different weapons. It would be more enjoyable if the enemies moved around. Attacking little blue balls gets very boring quickly.

[NYPD: Detective]

Stick figures are never going to cut it, you need to flesh out your characters. Animation was so slow and janky. Next time, submit a full and complete game.

camamassa21 responds:

I made this twenty years ago dude 😂

[NG Portal Defender]

This theme has been done so many times. Your graphics are okay, and the animation is average. You should spend more time and effort on your submissions.

[The Disappearing Wizard]

This is an old school trick and I have seen other versions of this concept. The main issue is that you force the player to move puzzle pieces. If you included animation, it would make more sense.