DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kates birthday wishes]

The animation is so choppy, you need to smooth it out. Graphics are average, but you should take your time and make them better. Having more options would be an improvement.

[Walking Cycle for Dummies]

This is a nice little tutorial. I can see that you are getting better at these flashes as you go.

[Virtual Pet Wolf]

Graphics are decent, but you should improve the detail on the wolf. The prices are too expensive, so lower them all by half. You should also start off with 300 or more cash.

[target shooting]

The targets show up too fast, and you don't have enough time to hit the bullseye shot. It really ruins the gameplay. Slow things down to give the player a chance.

[The Brewmiester]

The graphics are okay on the Brewmeister and on the beers. The large white background is really bare. You should have different levels where you try to get more beers and have the background change different colors.

[How-to kill Stickz v1.8]

Stick figures are the worst type of graphics. You should flesh out your figures since they are the biggest part of your game. If you include more deaths than the game would improve.

[Hoba Slam Dunk]

This is a very short basketball game. You should stop when you get to the mid court. The guy will walk all the way to end and not be able to take the shot.

[Maze version 1]

This is just a simple maze game. It was very easy for me to make it all the way through. The Suprise ending was not worth it. Next time try something more interesting than a maze.

[GTA Quiz]

I like Grand Theft Auto as a video game series. The quiz looks okay, but the first question is wrong. That can throw off your players, and they might quit. You should correct the first question's answer.

[Father Ted Clip-Board 2]

You should include more backstory about Father Ted, so people will know more about this TV show. The sound clips are okay, but you should have many more for improvement.