DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Room Cliker]

This is a normal clicker game where you can upgrade almost everything. The upgrades could be explained better, so you understand what they are do. Looking forward to what achievements you will add.

[Ninja's Story - beta]

This game needs a tutorial, or at least instructions. It is not fun to randomly press buttons, and have to guess how to play.

[Herocles' Drunken Dad]

Graphics are good, and the animation is nice. Fighting drunken Zeus is a fun concept. More power ups and attacks could work out well. Having more levels are fighting different Greek gods would be fun.

[FirstGame]

The sprite should be animated. You need a colored backgrounds with different objects, not just a blank white one. The jumping control is ridiculous. You jump all the way off the screen. There should be more levels and monsters to fight. What type of animal or person are you in this game?

[Brick Killer]

I like that ability to change different game modes. The game can be buggy when you have a collision. It also has issues with slowness. Lag can ruin even the best game. Fix the collisions bug, and remove the lag.

[Super Shooter]

This game is an action shooting game with decent graphics. There should a way to change the controls. Using the mouse to shoot and fly around is a bad idea. Arrows would make more sense for flying. Including power ups would be a way to make combat better.

[salary man vol:0]

This animated comic is rough, but could show potential. The story makes sense and not to difficult to follow. Add much more content, polish the graphics, and things will improve.

cajadeOjos responds:

well I have planned 6 more pages for the first volume, and the roughness was an aesthetic decision, although now i'm second guessing if it was a good one. Mainly I wanted to see the format and initial response to an interactive comic, aside from that thanks for the input!

[Undead Uprising 2D]

This is a game where you fight the undead minions. The minions run at too quickly and some of them take too many shots to defeat. You can be overwhelmed fast. Especially, within the start of the game. Make the undead slower or only use weaker ones at first.