DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shinigami Adventure]

This is an average action game, but not a RPG. You should include a plot and different weapons.

[Life]

A car that drives over images. This looks more like a screen saver, than a game.

[Stick Battle of DOOOM]

You should include the ability to translate the text to English. You should put more effort into a game and have a playtester. The graphics need work. You might want to find artist, if you need help.

[Luck (rpg)]

This game feels rushed. Improve the graphics, give more battle options, and have somebody play test your game before you submit it.

[Pixel Hero (The Beta)]

You submitted a Beta, and you should know better. The controls need work, and fix the bugs.

[HelloKitty Balloon Ride]

This game needs music, and a plot. It is a very basic game.

[Monster Frenzy BetaV2]

A Beta should be submitted. This game needs to be completed.

[Adventure Box]

This is a Beta, so you should know better. Only submit full and complete games. Fix the save and load functions.

[Comet defense]

The controls need work, improve the graphics, add more content, and add sound. You should always have a play tester before submitting a game.