DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mr. Sgt - Army Man v 1.0]

You should improve the graphics, add sound, and correct shooting.

[Whirlwind Sorceress]

The ad in the middle of the screen will not go away. It makes the game unplayable.

[1st day of hiscool redux]

Next time submit a finished game, not a demo. You include instructions, better graphics, and more content.

[Renardo RPG Demo]

Second demo, then you should really know better. Demos should not be uploaded. You lose health very fast in this game, that should be fixed.

[Dance Dance RPG]

Nice for a Ludum Dare game. You should include a tutorial, and a story. Include more content and polish.

[[beta Rpg Game] Girlhem]

A beta that will not start. You press start and it nothing happens. Right click and no play option.
This game is broken.

[Demo (prostreetchronical)]

Demo says it all, only submit full games. Fix the spelling and grammar mistakes. Remove the bugs.