DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Renardo RPG Demo]

Second demo, then you should really know better. Demos should not be uploaded. You lose health very fast in this game, that should be fixed.

[Dance Dance RPG]

Nice for a Ludum Dare game. You should include a tutorial, and a story. Include more content and polish.

[[beta Rpg Game] Girlhem]

A beta that will not start. You press start and it nothing happens. Right click and no play option.
This game is broken.

[Demo (prostreetchronical)]

Demo says it all, only submit full games. Fix the spelling and grammar mistakes. Remove the bugs.

[RPD warrior 2]

The controls need work, and you should add sounds and music. After, entering a door you get to the start screen. Fix the bugs and improve the graphics.

[square man (beta)]

Beta says it all. Complete games are what you should be submitting. Improve the sounds, music, and graphics.

[Monster Hunter Flash]

This is a demo, not a complete game. There is text you have click through and one battle. After a few clicks, the battle ends. Next time, submit a full and complete game. You should also create something original.