DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dance Dance RPG]

Nice for a Ludum Dare game. You should include a tutorial, and a story. Include more content and polish.

[[beta Rpg Game] Girlhem]

A beta that will not start. You press start and it nothing happens. Right click and no play option.
This game is broken.

[Demo (prostreetchronical)]

Demo says it all, only submit full games. Fix the spelling and grammar mistakes. Remove the bugs.

[RPD warrior 2]

The controls need work, and you should add sounds and music. After, entering a door you get to the start screen. Fix the bugs and improve the graphics.

[square man (beta)]

Beta says it all. Complete games are what you should be submitting. Improve the sounds, music, and graphics.

[Monster Hunter Flash]

This is a demo, not a complete game. There is text you have click through and one battle. After a few clicks, the battle ends. Next time, submit a full and complete game. You should also create something original.

[Jetpack Jackride]

This game reminds me of the Santa Claus jet pack game. If you are going to make all your games similar, you should include new and exciting things. Making the same game over and over is a very bad idea.

[Monster Squad Advanced]

This game is very repetitive, you move and fight multiple enemies over and over. You should add something new to make this game stand out from other similar ones. Graphics could be much better.

[Kold RPG]

You can pick up some coins, but not other ones. I can pick up blue potions, but not red ones. Why?
You should include a fullscreen option. More music would be helpful.