Animation looks nice and really flows. Graphics are good, and nice attention to detail. Bro, you used the word Bro very often. Comedy was silly and funny. Guys just talking and trading stories, is what Bros do in real life.
Animation looks nice and really flows. Graphics are good, and nice attention to detail. Bro, you used the word Bro very often. Comedy was silly and funny. Guys just talking and trading stories, is what Bros do in real life.
thanks, bro. youre a real bro, bro.
Black and white colors are usually lame, but you did a good job of using them. The animation is slow and solid. It helps to bring up the sense of fear and terror. Horror can be hard to pull off, but you did a good job.
Bill has tons of energy and he is showing off some of his moves. Animation flows well with him jumping all around. Graphics has a certain sketchy style. It has such a fast paced vibe.
Graphics are cute and silly, and the animation is silky smooth. This is a great remake of your original work. The song is the best part and it is fun to sing along.
The graphics look similar to the actual movie, but slightly off. The animation flowed well enough without any issue. It is nice for a short trailer. I look forward to seeing the longer submission with lots more comedy.
Thanks for the feedback
There is very little animation in this movie, and the transitions are rigid. You should smooth it out and make it slicker overall. The black and white colors was a poor idea. Everybody knows the colors of these characters. I do not like the plain background. It needs color or and maybe some trees or clouds.
School is okay, but the people are the worst. Doing school online is definitely the way to go. Animation flows well enough, and the art is average. You could use more attention to detail on the people. The gun at the end is funny. It should be longer and have more comedy making fun of school.
If you read the description, you can see that that was originally the idea. The problem was that I got tired of working on this and it just wasn't that good, so I cut it short.
The animation was smooth and flawless. Graphics are special effects were all spot on. All the video characters that showed up looked great. Not bad for a commercial advertisement.
Black and white figures is not a good idea. They need color and attention to detail. The solid white background is definitely bad. Add color and maybe some trees or clouds at least. The comedy needs more humor. Five seconds is too short. It should be at least seven, but I would prefer ten seconds.
Madness people are just hanging out and looking at a cucumber. I was waiting for somebody to pull out a gun, but there was no guns. They could of used a sword to slice up the cucumber and had a salad. You should add color to the background.
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Florida
Joined on 10/20/04