DoctorStrongbad's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cartoon- On and On music video in stickman version]

The outer space theme and aliens were done well. The stick figures should more detailed, but would look better fleshed out. The counting down clock was a nice touch.

RNHunter responds:

bro actually if you want full detailed than you cn watch on youtube titlee is when gamer help alien actually this is part 4 so not much detail is given

[Alternate Future of America]

This America alternative future has lots of creativity. Do you have a limited amount of colors to pick from? Yellow, Orange, and especially Gray are great colors. Gray always makes a good bad guy color. If you ever needs more ideas about the dialogue, let me know. Maybe I could help you with your next mapping animation?

[Alternate History of Europe WWII episode 1]

I think this is one of the first mapping videos that I have seen. I really enjoyed it, and the historical tie in was a great idea. If you use more different colors and improve the comments that that nation make, it would really improve.

[Happy Moms Day!]

This is a nice little animation. If you make it longer with more comedy, it would really reach the next level. Happy Mother's day to all.

[Test.fla]

Animation is okay, but could be smoother. It feels really incomplete. Give it some more work, make it longer, and polish everything. That would show off your skills.

[The Loaf Zone]

There is so much going on and all of it is wonderful. So many unique and detailed characters from a screaming bird, a shark with a Miami beach shirt, and just regular citizens living their lives. The best part was that it all ties together. Excellent job.

[Natural Love]

The Graphics are detailed and colorful. Romance and comedy both combined really well. The randomness was a nice touch.

[Pico's Sushi Party (unfinished but enjoyable)]

Pico had plenty of action and even had a good sushi meal at the end. The animation flowed well for an incomplete submission. The lack of color really hurt the overall quality of the movie. Happy Pico Day 2018

[Tattooin - On the Airplane]

The colors are vivid and striking. The animation is crisp and all the images are all very detailed. The wild west backdrop was interesting. Adding subtitles would be a nice improvement.

["Gun Fun" Animatic - A student work]

The artwork is wonderful, and your personal style really comes across well. Plenty of details and nice animation. More humor and comedy would make it even better.

DatCakeIzEhPai responds:

Thank you very much! Yes, more humor could be amazing. If I had more time and interest in finishing this but major projects requires my full attention so sorry if there won't be a full animated version of this in the future.