DoctorStrongbad's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Final Prophecy: Gliese 581 G]

Nice job, it would be nice if your water had a little more blue. It's hard to make it out against all that gray and white.

Acrylla responds:

It is actually ice, I didn't want it to stand out too much... I tried making it pop more but that took away from the image as a whole.

[18.6.15]

Nice fire. I like your details on your guy. Clever to use the dark shading only for your details. Im not sure where he is supposed to be, it kind of looks like a graveyard to me, though i'm not sure if that is what you were going for.

rasikaCart responds:

Looking back, I should've made the structures bigger so that they look like buildings. But thanks for your nice comments :)

[The Last Guardian (Fan Art)]

Nice job! I like the light shine effect. The only thing I would like to see changed is the details in the character's face. I can barely see eyes, I can't see a nose or mouth at all.

YakovlevArt responds:

Fair enough. The bloom is too strong it seems.
Thanks!

[Fear the Light]

Interesting. Kind of reminds me of that one Finding Nemo scene. The only thing I would suggest is maybe outline the scuba diver's tank or make it a different color so you can see it. I had a hard time seeing the ocean in this, the bubbles helped but I still had to look at your author's note to make sure it was the ocean. I think a little more detail on the guy's tank and maybe flippers could help a lot.

Kiabugboy responds:

thank you for your suggestions. i tried to make the tank and flippers more noticeable and added a few sharks. this drawing was inspired by that Finding Nemo scene

[Skate Tile]

When I first saw this I thought this was a combinations of a skateboard and a band aid. The little dots on the skateboard give it a band aid look, you might want to get rid of the holes. I like how you made the skateboard a character. However there should be wheels on top as well, they are missing a set of wheels. This actually reminds me of the old Nickelodeon show Rocket Power.

Aope responds:

Thanks for the review (:

[Science Princess Bubblegum - Adventure Time]

I actually thought this lady was a dentist. It looked like a tooth on her pocket. Either way, nice picture. The only thing I would change is how her smile is seen inside her glasses, thats a bit too far up. Her smile shouldn't be that high. I also wasn't a fan of the long stream of hair coming around her like a U shape. The hair is too smooth, looks unreal. Maybe add some strain details to it?

[Erl]

This is creepy but done very well. Usually I perfer color art but black and white works really well to bring this freaky character to life.

GGTFIM responds:

i'm glad you like it ! thanks!

[artery]

I have no idea what I am looking at but I guess that's the point of Abstract art. Im more for realistic art or cartoon art but interesting drawing.

conundrummer responds:

Thank you! I'll do better next time!

[Halloweentown Witch]

I don't know Halloween Town but I know Bewitch and it looks just like it.

[Meime's Dragon]

This is really cool! I like it alot. I can see this as a book cover on a child's book or illustration inside. Good imagination and drawing skills.

odditiesbyangela responds:

Thank you :)