DoctorStrongbad's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[she has no name]

I honestly couldn't tell this was a woman. She has a boob outline on one side of her body and the other side is flat, you might want to fix that. It might help also if you put color on her lips, a light pink or light red. Maybe give her some eyelashes, it looks like she is wearing eyeliner with no eyelashes.

[Lost]

Good job! You're good at putting detail in your artwork without overdoing, it has just enough detail. The skin coloring is nice. The hair strands blowing in the breeze is a cool effect. The eyes are great, they are piercing and draw your attention to them. The lip shading and highlights are good, looks like she is really wearing lip gloss/glossy lipstick. The only thing I'm curious about and questioning is the gray specks all over your picture. What are they supposed to be?

[Rineri]

Where are the hands and feet? This work is incomplete. However, it has potential. I like your open eye, lots of detail that makes it pop. You need to put more of this attention to detail in the rest of your drawing.

CuteNikeChan responds:

The hands are covered by his long hoodie and the feet are drawn in a style followed by his pants, but thank you for your statement~

[Emerald Mineral Study painting]

Very strange. Im not even sure what this is suppose to be. I see you said you quit midway. It would have helped if you atleast said what it was you were trying to make. The Emeralds look real. The shine is nice on them. However, The white substance looks like a mixture of ice cream and gum. It's odd to say the least.

[Garnet - Steven Universe]

The lady's leg in red looks broken because of the way you positioned it. Both her calves and feet should be facing the same direction. By the way, why is the one leg red? Is it supposed to be shading? If so, the whole leg should not be red, only part of it. The rest should be pink. The glowing highlight effect you used is nice but your art needs a bit of work.

XavierStarr responds:

Thanks for the feedback.

That's how garnets suit is coloured in the series, she has a dark near black far right leg, whilst the other is a lighter shade of pink. as for her legs I disagree they should always be facing the same way as our legs do bend and rotate at the hips slightly, Knees a little more then at the ankles alot more. I actually had a friend do some reference poses for in which she positioned her legs identical to this.

[Batman]

I see you like super heros. Any plans to make a Thor drawing or Iron man? Perhaps a drawing of all The Avengers? That would be cool.

TheIYouMe responds:

I've been meaning to do Iron Man for a while, so he's definitely coming. Eventually I'd like to do all of the Avengers individually and then maybe a joint piece with all of them together.

[Luli McMullen]

Good job of the hair, face, body position and shadow. If you're trying to make a g string, her underwears should be slimmer hints the word "String" in g string. If not, they should be wider, covering more. The skirt looks too short to be a skirt and it's a bit uneven. Also the stripes are uneven on the socks. Other than that nice work.

[16.6.15]

You did a really good job at the lighting. The contrast of the dark shading and the lighter warm colors. Great fire by the way, looks real. The only thing I wish is that I could see a closer look at the person in the cave/cliff area. It's hard to see their face and to be able to depict whether it is a man or a woman.

rasikaCart responds:

Thanks! I be sure to consider that next time :)

[jurassic flare]

Good job! Looks just like the scene from Jurassic Park. I like how you gave the flare that glowing look to it. Can't really say anything negative. I see you were going for a smooth look. The only think I will say is it would have been better if you could have added scales to the dinosaur and maybe make his eye glow a little if possible.

afiboy69 responds:

hey thank you =). I agree with you on the scales. however i wanted to do this strictly within 30 mins so i couldn't finish this to perfection unfortunately.

[Rocky Balboa - AgeSwap]

Rocky Balboa as a child. That's definitely not something you see every day. Good job on the originality.

babiben responds:

Thanks!