DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[wizerd]

Mouse themed flash. Graphics are basic and need more polishing. You should explain how to play the game, and which keys are the controls.

[Ricky Bobby Soundboard]

Sound board featuring Ricky Bobby. Graphics are nine buttons and a picture as a background. Including animation would be excellent. You need many more than just nine clips.

Mondayzz93 responds:

Yeah, you're right. I honestly was trying to get down the hardcore basics of flash. A problem of mine is I see my page on NG to me a museum of the things I make instead of things in proud of and want to show people. I'm trying to get better at animation and hopefully I'll take your advise to heart and make a second one of these with all of the things you said in mind.

[Ghost Town Escape 4 – Mirrored Dimension]

Escape the building flash. Graphics have a dark and scary tone. Gameplay is using point and click to solve all of the puzzles. You should include unlockables to improve the replay factor.

[Battle of The Spirits]

Battle themed flash. Graphics are so tiny that I can barely see them. You should make them much larger. Adding the controls to the Author Comments would be a smart idea. You should add new troops to spawn and power ups.

[Control A Town 4!!]

Town controlling themed flash. Graphics are good enough to tell everything apart. Allowing the controls to be reconfigurable would be helpful. You should include a detailed tutorial that explains how to play and what to do.

John4eyes responds:

Sounds like a good idea

[Vtuber Clicker 2 Final Season]

Pet sim flash. Graphics are colorful and the pets are detailed. Gameplay is all about clicking over and over. You should include a way to click faster to make progression easier.

lastmiau responds:

that is the goal of the video game, to be simple and relaxing 👍 that's why i added the gold bonus to make it faster

[May, 2016]

Text RPG alpha. Graphics are just text in black and white and sometimes blue. Adding some animations and more color would be a nice touch. Gameplay is all about picking your choice. With more content and choices this alpha could become a full game.

[Headfirst To Hell]

Rhythm themed flash. The graphics are good enough to tell everything apart. I could use more special effects in some razzle dazzle. Gameplay feels very challenging. You should start it off easy and then make it harder as you progress.

[MARMELADE]

Visual novel flash. Graphics are pretty much just red, black, and grey. Adding brighter colors would make things look more vivid. If you like to read than this might be the flash for you.

ezd responds:

The limited palette was a design choice we made to give the game a precise look! Sorry to hear you didn't appreciate it, I understand it isn't everyone's jam (pun intended)

[Seastep-v0.02]

Platformer flash. Graphics have nice solid backgrounds but could use tons of special effects. You should allow the controls to be reconfigurable. That would be a good idea. You should add more levels and some unlockables.