DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Barrel Smasher]

Car themed flash. Graphics are rough and need some polishing up. Gameplay is trying to collect barrels, and you die if you hit an explosive barrel. You should be able to use your score to purchase unlockables and upgrades.

[Talking Dumb]

Body simulation flash. The graphics are recorded scenes that are awkward and goofy. I am going to guess that it is the author that was recorded. You should add meters, so we can tell how well our buddy is doing. Including more actions would also be helpful.

[Matteria]

Clicker gadget. The game size is way too small, and you should make it a standard screen size. All you do is click and score increases. There is nothing to purchase or lock at all. This is just too basic the count as a game.

[My Talking Yoshi]

Yoshi themed pet simulation. The Yoshi Sprite that has been taken from Nintendo. There are four different categories that you have to keep track of to make your pet happy. If you can add original artwork and animation Yoshi would look improved.

BBgunfan1997 responds:

It’s a png.

[Sonic: The Pandora Disc (FLASH EDITION)]

Creepypasta remake. Graphics are sprites taken from Sonic games. You should use your own artwork and create your own characters. This is a remake so there is nothing new or exciting. You should try to increase your level of creepiness and scare factor.

NogginStudio responds:

Like I said in the description, the game has limits, I'll try to improve it in the executable version

[шутер]

Action shooter demo. The graphics on the hand looked like a very early version of Wolfenstein. The green enemies really need to be fleshed out. You should add more weapon choices and different upgrades to collect.

[clicker boss]

This is less than a clicker demo. The graphics are a premade cat sprite so there is no originality. All you do is put the cat. There are no other options at all.

Pepewinxo responds:

im a starter developer, it's a constructive opinion, i apreciate that

[nario preview {zx spectrum style}]

Platformer preview. Graphics are low quality and low attention to detail. The screen auto scrolls sometimes without the main character. The game does not last long enough.

voptik123 responds:

graphics is low bcs look at the title theres some words "zx spectrum style" theres old computer that popular in uk bcs it small money need to pay and bcs that the computer have vry bad graphic

[HELP THE GIRL 2 (USK 12)]

Platformer demo. The graphics could use a higher level of detail and better visuals. Gameplay lasts maybe five seconds, and you walk to the boy. Game length needs to be longer and contain more content.