DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[CastleVania FD]

Reducing the screen size has never worked out well. Return it to the standard size. Gameplay lacks the ability to use special weapons while you jump. There is slowdown and also freezing in this flash. Correct all the bugs, the lag, fix the screen size, and polish up everything.
6/12/23

[Ball Fall]

Good idea in theory, but needs to be properly executed. Graphics could use more attention and shine. Including more levels with an actual ending, would make this a more well rounded game. You should never insult your players in the Author Comments.
6/12/23

[LOTR Speech sampler]

More of a gadget than an actual game. Some of the clips do not work, that is a major glitch. Make sure of all of you clips work, and then add many more. You should organize the clips so people know from where each sound was taken. 6/12/23

[Daily2oonSE: Starmageddon]

You zoom around in a vehicle and destroy stars. Graphics are low quality, so you need them to look much better. Including upgrades and powerups would be a nice use of your score.
6/12/23.

[KONG KICKS ASS]

Kong not only hates most celebrities, but really seems to dislike women. If you added many more death options and overall animations than this flash could become Top Notch.

[Motion tween tutorial]

This is only one basic tutorial. If you included more tutorials, that would increase the usefulness of this flash. Adding more graphics and animations is always a good idea.

[Extreme Dress up v 1]

Another dress up flash that suffers from the same issues as many others. The character is too small, he should be larger to show him off. You need many more props choices. Dress up games work much better with a cute anime girl, not a guy.

[Neon]

Neon is an arcade style shooting game. It seems very similar to asteroids with some changes. If you allowed the player to reconfigure the controls, that would be helpful. Gameplay can slow down at times.

[Bill's Button Tutorial]

Bill's Button Tutorial is aimed at newbies but suffers from errors. It really needs a preloader at the start. You should be able to copy the AS scripts and have them function.

[World cup soccer!]

World cup soccer seemed to be a decent flash, but just feels like a demo. Graphics were maybe the best part of the game. Controls need to be tighter, and your goalie should be more agile. This could be much improved once it is finished.