DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Baka and Miki Lip sync]

You can definitely tell that this was a school project. Graphics are okay, but there should be much more animation. You should work on your timing and comedy skills.

[Usable Preloader Tutorial]

As a tutorial, this flash does work. It could use fancy graphics and animations to keep your audience paying attention. If you added a few musical options, that would be an improvement.

[action scripts v.1]

When making a tutorial you must have mastered the skills you want to teach. You have not done this. This tutorial just seems like you copied down some things without understand them yourself.

[powerpets test]

Since this is just a test, I will view it as a demo. Many of the buttons do not work, that should be corrected. Adding more buttons and choices would also be a smart idea. Including a few music choices would also be helpful.

[Custom Lightsaber Builder]

When you make a Star Wars about Lightsabers, people will expect perfection. This builder game is average at best. There should be more choices, more ways to customize them, and more color options. You should have offered more than just one musical choice.

[Punch Blood]

This is a basic punching game. Graphics should be more detailed, especially the blood should match where you punch him. If you had more attacks than just punching, the gameplay would be more exciting.

[Power Failure]

Your graphics are average and that is the best thing about this flash. The controls need work to make it easier. Gameplay becomes repetitive quickly.

[PenaltyShooter]

Here we have another flash that walks the line of being a movie more than a game. Gameplay is too easy. If you gave the goalie more moves, it would raise the challenge level.

[pats insult generator]

This soundboard seems more like a demo than a finished flash. The voice is not clear, and it speaks slowly. It might be better once you complete it.

[Parachuting]

A basic flash about collecting coins. Controls work well, and I found it to be very easy. Graphics should be flashier and better looking.