DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Basket Ball]

Graphics are a black box with no detail at all, a green square, and a large red background. There should be goals to complete. This game is slow. Lag can ruin even the best game.

[Voxel Pixel Blocky Granny Escape]

The graphics are blocks, and could be much better looking. There should be an easier way to not get caught. If you added power ups or upgrades if would really help. It would also help the replay factor.

[Drunken Tennis]

This is a challenging game, but not for the right reasons. Having the screen shake was not a good idea. It just frustrates the player. You could of made drunk power downs that slow you down, and normal power ups that make you normal speed or faster. The more power ups the better in any game.

[car racers]

A basic driving game with several issues. You can drive on the grass which should never happen. There should be goals to accomplish and different levels. It really feels like a demo at this point.

[The Sacrifice Basketball]

This is a really short mini game. It is even shorter if you sacrifice longer play time. This game could use a shop. You could be able to keep your score and use it to purchase upgrades. Not bad for a Ludum Dare 43 entry.

[Spooky Hallway]

This is more of a demo than a game. You can only go one direction, and there is just one box to pick up. Once you go outside, you hit an invisible wall and can not continue. It is not that scary for a spooky game.

[Self-defense towers]

The tutorial level should really explain what each tower does, instead of just saying " tap." The graphics should be larger and more detailed. The Author Comments should be in English. Including more tower choices and upgrades would be a great idea.

[Circus Ringmaster Escape]

Graphics are colorful and have the circus feeling down pat. I have never seen a dog locked in a cage at the circus before, but the monkey made sense. It feels like this game was made complicated, just so players would have to use the walkthrough.

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[Swarm]

This is a small but sweet avoider game. The graphics could be larger, so they are easier to see. You should be able to keep your score and use those points for power ups. That would increase the replay factor.

[Pong with a twist]

The original pong game with the ability to alter the ball speed. It is functional, but not very fun. Adjusting the ball speed can lead to issues, like the ball will vanish. Next time, try an original idea. That will help you get noticed and improve you game making skills.