DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dead Rider]

A basic motorcycle game. You should add something special to make this game stand out.

[Elliot Quest (Demo)]

This is a Demo, and should not be submitted. Do not try to sell your game, especially an incomplete one.

[Joyride (working)]

You can drive around a small city, but you can not leave. You should improve the graphics and add more action.

[Bigger is better]

This is not a RPG. It needs a pause button and music.

[I SAW A DREAM]

After starting the game start there is only a black screen. Fix the game ,so it can be played.

[Shinigami Adventure]

This is an average action game, but not a RPG. You should include a plot and different weapons.

[Life]

A car that drives over images. This looks more like a screen saver, than a game.

[Stick Battle of DOOOM]

You should include the ability to translate the text to English. You should put more effort into a game and have a playtester. The graphics need work. You might want to find artist, if you need help.

[Luck (rpg)]

This game feels rushed. Improve the graphics, give more battle options, and have somebody play test your game before you submit it.