DoctorStrongbad's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Winkwiz]

The drawing is rough and the animation is choppy. It looks rushed, you should take your time when drawing and animating. Adding bright colors would be a nice touch.

[The Brothers Part 1]

The rain effect was a major part of the video, but it could of looked smoother. Using stick figures is always looked down on. There should be more content, and it could be longer as well.

[Inter-dimentional Donkey People - Episode 362]

The donkeys are drawn okay, but it really needs more animation. The black and white style would of been improved with color. Making up a random number of Episode 362 is lacking humor.

Electofunk responds:

Cool - thanks

[Emanation]

The different colors are vivid, and the shapes are very fluid. Animation was fine, but could of been soother. It starts out at the beach with waves and just keeps going through random changes. Great work.

[Riven on instagram]

Plenty of action and combat in this video. It is not bad for stick men, but would look much better if they were all flashed out. The upgrades were done in a unique way. Making it longer would be a great idea.

[Autonomous Imaging]

I like this abstract idea. It is an interesting combination of animation and art. The variety of colors is a really nice touch. Will this be the beginning of a new series?

MobMarley responds:

Maybe? I think all of my videos are part of a series. I want to do animation that is very abstract and experimental. I also wanted to make a departure from mangas or cartoons. Newgrounds won't allow most of my work so if your interested in seeing my entire video portfolio go here

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC6rp-oh8jDrCE9I9H7iLVOg/videos?shelf_id=0&view=0&sort=dd

[GMSU 05-17-18]

The jokes start right away and pull you into the news segments. Stan Lee is a true Icon even when he is green. Grab yourself a cup of coffee or tea and enjoy the entire film.

threebrain responds:

haha tanks, Dr Strong Bad!

[Action Hang Glider]

This is a silly themed music video, but there is a great story that you can follow along. The images are powerful from a hang glider, to the alien spaceship, and the dolphin. It would of been nice to see some Miami Dolphins Easter eggs included.

[The Art of Quitting]

You really explained quitting and its bad effects well. The animation was okay, but could of been smoother. The biggest issue was the lack of color. Using bright and vivid colors would of been a wonderful idea.

AnimatedStruggle responds:

I gotcha! I'm still experimenting with the style, in order to speed up my production time. Thank you for your feed back! I gotta another one in the works right now, and i'm glad I took a sec to come back and look at comments. After seeing this and Peregrinus's notes, i'm gonna add the splashes of color, and add more frame work to my animations. The next video will be out soon.

[First Time Getting Stoned]

The animation flows well from one scene to the next. The roommates are all unique and really detailed. Plenty of weed related humor and comedy. It makes you think twice about drugs and what can happen if you take them. Nice job.

RocketAdrift responds:

Thanks!