Jake got more than he bargained for when he got a plant from the store. The humor was a little silly, but was still funny. The plant was the star, but the car driving badly was nice comedy. Great job.
Jake got more than he bargained for when he got a plant from the store. The humor was a little silly, but was still funny. The plant was the star, but the car driving badly was nice comedy. Great job.
Thanks man, been working on this for 2.5 months and kind of feel like it was worth it with all this positive feedback :D
Is this your first animation? If so, you did a nice job. The animation could flow better and the stick figures would look better fleshed out. The red blood really stands out.
Doctor Strongbad! Thanks man, I'm working on a sequel right now, this is my 3rd animation :) I'm a huge fan by the way, I love your stuff man from all the way back in 2007 :) <3
The background is drawn and colored well. Animation is okay for the few seconds. However, it is just too short. A serious animation should be at least thirty seconds.
The animation is jumpy, but that can be expected when the movie was made on and off over six months. The humor is also hit and miss. Next time, just work on one animation at a time. Your quality will really improve.
This is not bad for a practice animation. The background is just too blank. There should be objects, or at least have it colored in. Nice work. By the way, I checked out Scotch on Youtube.
That dark colors help to make it feel gloomy and lonely. The rain towards the end was a nice effect. Smooth animation and an interesting plot. Is this the beginning of a series?
I hope it does! I definitely have more ideas for this setting!
The outer space theme and aliens were done well. The stick figures should more detailed, but would look better fleshed out. The counting down clock was a nice touch.
bro actually if you want full detailed than you cn watch on youtube titlee is when gamer help alien actually this is part 4 so not much detail is given
This America alternative future has lots of creativity. Do you have a limited amount of colors to pick from? Yellow, Orange, and especially Gray are great colors. Gray always makes a good bad guy color. If you ever needs more ideas about the dialogue, let me know. Maybe I could help you with your next mapping animation?
I love most video game parody movies and I'm trying to earn my way to the top. :)
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