DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Helix Defense]

Defense Outerspace flash. Graphics are nice but could use more polish. Gameplay was hurt by glitches and bugs. Remove them right away. After that, having more types of turrets, attacks, and special moves would be helpful.

[STFU Newb [a Tutorial]]

Basic tutorial that is aimed toward new users of flash. This borrows components from other places. Next time, you should create all your own work.

This was made on 6/28/05, and I am only the twelfth person to review it.

[Ship Shooter]

Flash featuring spaceships and shooting. Average spaceship game, nothing new or exciting at all. If you added different ship choices, many different weapon choices, and special attack than this could be better.

[Comic Strip Gallery]

Comic strip themed flash. Graphics are just pictures and words. There is no animation at all. You should add a few musical choices to listen to while reading.

This was made on 5/16/08, and I am only the sixth person to review it.

[Machine #1 -Breakfast-]

Interactive movie instead of an actual game. If you allowed people to change parts of the machine that would increase the content.

[Castelvania SOH]

Simple flash that borrows from Castlevania. Gameplay was too short, and the challenge was very low. Comedy came down to one joke at the end.

[TUT: Navigation Slider]

Small tutorial about making a draggable slider. Graphics are okay and you can tell everything apart. Adding more examples would be a smart idea.

This was made on 2/7/08, and I am only the eighth person to review it.

[Japanese anime girl]

Flash featuring a Japanese anime girl. You should add more props. If you added the ability to animate your creation, and a way to interact with her it would be an improvement.

This was made on 1/22/08, and I am only the seventh person to review it.

[-Christmas Cursor-]

Christmas themed cursor guiding flash. The graphics definitely presented the Christmas vibe. Gameplay can become repetitive quickly. You should give the option of different musical tracks and should include a mute button.

[Zombie Swarm]

Another zombie themed flash. It feels like a demo. If you added, different levels, more weapon choices, and upgrades It could be better.