Using a school assignment as a NewGrounds submission never goes well. Your teacher has lower expectations than the NewGrounds audience. If you added more levels, a plot that makes sense, and plenty of action, than this might be better.
This was made on 9/27/05, and I am only the sixteenth person to review it.
This feels like a dress up flash featuring a toilet paper holder. Very weak even for a game made way back in 2000.
One of the first action shooters all about Pikachu on NewGrounds. If you had upgrades to the shooting attacks that would be an improvement.
A very basic torture and kill flash featuring Pickachu. Improving the graphics and adding many more options would help this game be better.
Graphics were the best part of this flash. It was too short, and it should be much longer. Adding more areas to explore and content would be helpful.
You should never submit an old animation. Spend time and effort on a new creation before submitting something to NewGrounds.
This was made on 9/2/04, and I am only the fourteenth person to review it.
Simple tutorial that might be helpful to a new user. With dynamic graphics and more information this could be much better.
It is mostly a minigame where you do the same thing over and over. It is way too short. The music is annoying and needs different track choices.
Since this was based off Asteroids, it's not an original idea. You finished this game around a year before you submitted it. You should have spent more time and effort on it.
This was made on 12/14/04, and I am only the seventeenth person to review it.
Submitting an unfinished flash is always a poor idea. You should explain everything to do clearly and include the controls in your Author Comments.
I love most video game parody movies and I'm trying to earn my way to the top. :)
Age 30, Male
Florida
Joined on 10/20/04
Hospital 
Toilet Paper 
Pikachu Must Die 
Abuse-a-chu 
Simple AS Tut 1 
Kick People In The Balls 
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