DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Buttons Tutorial Basic]

Button tutorial flash. Colors used are black and white with a little red. Adding more colors would make it look more vivid. You do not give enough Information and it ends too quickly. Make it longer and give the viewer more background and examples.

This was made on 1/19/09, and I am only the sixth person to review it.

[Basic Buttons Tutorial 4]

This is just a basic create a button tutorial. It could use more polish to look professional. You should explain everything you present in more detail. Adding a back button would be great.

This game was made on 6/27/09, and I am only the tenth person to review it.

[Tutorials for (noobs)]

Tutorial made for noobs. Visuals are too basic and could have used razzle dazzle to spice it up. You should give more explanations and examples to help noobs.

[Skill Stack]

Stacking puzzle flash. The screen size should be larger, so you can play longer. You press the spacebar to plant the stack. You should be able to use your score to unlock things after you die.

[Kill Me!]

Puzzle platformer flash. Graphics are colorful, but they could be zoomed in. Gameplay is mostly just killing yourself to proceed to the next level. You should be able to increase your jumping height.

[Skill Archer]

Archery themed flash. Graphics only use the colors of green and black. The challenge level gets tough and then the challenge grows harder. Adding upgrades and more check points would be helpful.

[Red Eats Yellow (submission for LD40)]

Sliding puzzle flash. The graphics need more polish to look professional. You use the arrow keys to collect yellow dots. There is almost no challenge. Becomes repetitive very quickly.

[Pay with your life!]

Shooting themed demo. Graphics are circles without detail or style. The concept of killing yourself before gameplay begins is faulty. Using a beta tester would help catch glitches and errors.

[Finders Seekers]

Find the exit flash. The graphics have a dark and spooky vibe. Gameplay is all about the pointing and the clicking. This is one of those games that makes very little sense. You are forced to read the walkthrough if you want to finish it.

[Eddie's Lament]

Rhyming themed flash. Graphics are tame for a game with zombies. It could use lots of blood and gore. Gameplay is point and click and the rhymes. It was really short, so you might want to make it longer.