DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[El Roca]

This is a submission that ends in a few seconds. There is almost no game play at all. You could try adding more levels and objectives to accomplish.

Michael-13 responds:

Okay.

[WMM]

This is a painting demo. Painting programs have been done many times in the past. It would be very challenging to turn a panting program into a full and complete game. You would be better off trying a new idea.

[THE WAR WORLD]

War themed demo. Graphics need polish to look more professional. An army guy runs around and shoots stuff. Writing controls in the game and In English was nice. Dying after one hit is not fun. You should add power ups and upgrades.

[THE TANKWORLD]

Tank themed demo. The tank looks nice and there is at least a green background. You should list the controls in your Author's Comments. I managed to drive the tank, but every obstacle killed me. You should add a health bar, because tanks should not die in one hit.

[Jump Machine]

Jumping demo. The main character is a ball with eyes and mouth that flash colors and a black hat. There is just white in the background. You jump around to attempt to get higher. Unfortunately, not all of the springs work so you get stuck.

Get rid of the flashing effect, polish up the main character, and add some color to those background walls. Also make sure all of you springs work.

[Kosmos]

Spaceship themed game. The background looks kind of like Outerspace. Controls are point and click to move the spaceship and fire. I am confused by the three little dancing people on the bottom on the screen. Why are they there?

I beat Noob, Pro, Max, and Goot. After Goot, the asteroids only spawned about one every thirty seconds until the game shopped.

You should add an awesome ending after Goot.

[My 2D World]

Adventure themed demo. The colors are bright, and the main character looks like a yellow Gameboy. Controls work good enough to complete the small level. However, once you finish it the game loops to the beginning. You need more levels. Being able to spend the coins in a shop could be a good idea.

[HEIP THE GIRL PLEASE]

Girl saving flash. Graphics are simple and could be polished up. Jumping is sticky specially when jumping near a platform. Adding the controls to the Author's Comments would be helpful. This feels like a demo. With better graphics and improved controls this could be better.

[The Test of Insanity]

Puzzle Quiz demo. Graphics are detailed and colorful. Solving the puzzles is all about trying your best and being creative. If you like a good quiz, this is the game for you. The only downside is that this demo is short. At only 10 questions, it could be longer.

The medals work, and I earned them all.

[epic plumber bros.]

This is a low quality remake of Super Mario Bros for the NES. The graphics look very rushed. A good game requires lots of time and effort. Controls were janky and jumping into the blocks did nothing. Next time, do not copy one of the world's most famous video games.