DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Virtual Stick 2]

Stick figure police officers is not a bad idea, but also nothing original. If you take your time and aim the game is very easy. I often could kill two enemies with one shot. Including power ups and more weapons could help the replay factor.

[Clock Land FPS experiment]

The graphics need polish and shine to look better. You should include a tutorial, so the players have an idea of controls and gameplay. Once you complete this game it should really improve.

[Chase 'm Down II]

The graphics are colorful, but way too small. You should make them larger and increase the attention to detail. You need borders to keep your character on the screen. I pressed right and was quickly off the screen and could not return. The loading time is very slow. That will turn off most players.

[cubed.]

Graphics are decent at best. Including a double jump could be a helpful feature. This would be a simple game, but it's a demo. Next time, complete your game before submitting it.

[Tank Wars]

Graphics are colorful but could contain more attention to detail. Aiming works well with the controls. The yellow tank destroys itself, so not much of a challenge. This feels like a very early demo.

[Metal Slug S]

The black and white graphics really need color. The controls are barely functionally and need a way to be reconfigured. Since your goal was just to make a game, you did succeed. Next time, try to make a game that work and is pretty.

[=Scary Encounter=]

Building a scary game can be tricky because you have to identify your audience. This seems to be focused on a younger audience, maybe children 12 or younger. It would be hard to trick other viewers, since you mention that "something" might happens. That really gives the surprise jump scares away.

[Sesame St.Life (demo)]

Graphics have a dark tone that is strange when applied to the Sesame Street residents. The humor is crass, but it gets the point across. It is really short, and desperately needs more content. Another demo that needs to be finished.

[Spear Britney]

Graphics are colorful and nice attention to detail on her face. However, why is she so far away. She should be closer to the screen, so it's easier to see her. Once you have finished stopping both arrows, you should have the options to start moving them again. Makes no sense to throw if you are not on target.