DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dead Detention 2 #3]

This is a good game, but the story tokens ruin it. They add nothing to the game, and are a distraction to enjoying the plot. You should really remove them from all of your future games.

The medals work, and I earned them all.

JackAstral responds:

You don't have to collect them! They just hint at future story developments!

[TRANSGRESSION]

An okay game where you control two characters at once. The controls need work, and they should be an option to increase the brightness.

AlexVsCoding responds:

Just to note (Which I'll add to the description), this game is intended to be played with someone else. It doesn't provide the same experience alone. If you want to play a platformer that's been built around the premise of controlling two characters simultaneously, I'd suggest you take a look at Narcissus (Check project lists).

[Sneaky Mission Denver]

This episode was not your best. Too many puzzles and the pool table did not help that much. Keep your games short and sweet with two or three puzzles maximum.

The medals work, and I earned them all.

selfdefiant responds:

I feel like I have to make some games bigger. Not everyone wants a quick game. :) Thanks!

[(demo) UltimateKungFuRPG]

This is a Demo, only submit complete games. Improve the graphics, add more content, and remove the music loop.

nfdgoins responds:

Thanks for the response on a game I uploaded 6 years ago.

[Deadlight]

This is a Beta, only submit finished games.

travisnelson responds:

I've carefully reviewed all of the FAQs and rules from 2009 when this was posted and I see nothing about betas not being allowed. Can you refer me to the 2009 web page on archive.org that states this rule?

[Sandman]

There should be an English translation option. Improve the graphics, and add a skip button.

kingpirux responds:

we are working on the english version and a graphic update, hopefully at least the english version will be uploaded next month

[Towns and Talons]

This game needs more to keep the player's attention. Make some enemies tougher, add more fun, and better graphics.

Zrugel responds:

Thanks for the advice, and for the review.

[Failed Robbery]

Every game needs a way to win, this game does not. Graphics and content should both be improved.

Matthcw responds:

Yeah, thanks for the review, I have learnt this lesson!

[Circle Warrior]

This game could use upgrades and checkpoints. Include more content and polish it up.

MSGhero responds:

I honestly forgot about this game. I'm in the middle of doing another TD game, so maybe I'll make another one of these down the line too.

[Way Of A Lord]

Do not submit betas, submit a finished game. Have you been updating this game? It needs much more content.

emercius responds:

Honestly man where did you even find it I made this sooooo long ago and no it hasnt been updated for ages :D