DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Buildify World!]

Sim builder alpha. Graphics are picking from six choices to create a wall. Gameplay is just picking a number and then point and click. This has potential, but it needs more options and content. The portal is not the place to submit an alpha.

NEJAGGAMES responds:

I do agree with it needing more content and stuff, however, I disagree with the portal not being a place for the game while in alpha-dev. I think it's a good place to start off with feedback before anything is published on the big markets like steam.

[Simon Says Zombie Rush]

Action shooter beta. Graphics are small and they should be larger and easier to see. Gameplay takes a few seconds to figure out. Having to collect the items in the right sequence seems unnecessary. Next time, submit a complete flash game.

[Rocco Pelosi Soundboard: GTA TBOGT & V]

Soundboard featuring Rocoo from GTA and GTA V. You need many more sound clips. Adding animations would really be an improvement.

[Anastasis]

Text only flash. You should add graphics and animation right away to improve the visuals. You just pick different options. There should be more interaction and action.

janosbiroleite responds:

It's interactive fiction, so it shouldn't have graphics, otherwise it would be a visual novel, which is a different kind of game. Text-based games like this are accessible to people with visual impairments. Your rating is based on a simplistic understanding of what a game should be.

[WHACK AT ADOLF HITLER WITH SFX]

Attack the celebrity flash. Graphics are exactly the same as the original version. You still need to and more moves and actions. The game just ends with no ending screen and returns to the starting menu.

[SnakePit]

Action Fighting flash. Graphics have vibrant colors. You should add the names of the snakes to the selection screen. After you pick, then it shows you the name. Gameplay has slowdown, and that can ruin any game. Remove of all the lag quickly.

[Lee's DeLeeVery Service!]

Platformer puzzle flash. Graphics have a retro feel and some interesting color choices. Gameplay feels over complicated. It is frustrating when you need a walkthrough just to finish a game.

[Turn Lands]

Collecting themed flash. Graphics are green and red boxes with a solid blue background. The background desperately needs clouds or something. It needs a tutorial to explain how everything works.

[Deep in mind]

Action alpha. Graphics are good enough to tell everything apart. Controls took a few seconds to master. There are glitches were clues and books won't interact properly. You should make sure all items work perfectly. With some more effort, this alpha could be ready to be completed.

[Stretch Soundboard: Grand Theft Auto V]

Soundboard featuring Stretch from GTA V. Graphics are average, but it really needs animations. Sound clips are nice, but you need many more of them.