DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[IGNIS-figuras de linguagem]

No idea what is going on in this game. Nothing is in English. You are floating in space while letters and numbers fly pass you. NewGrounds is an English website, you need to have everything in English.

Gustavoshark responds:

This is a Portuguese assignment from my school, Of course it won't be in English, the game description says that the game was not made for NewGrounds users.

[SWARM MASTER]

Shoot em up flash. Graphics have bright colors against an OuterSpace background. The ability to use scraps for offensive is interesting. How about using scraps for defense as well. That would open up an more opportunity for creativity.

[Darkness Revived]

Action themed shadow flash. Graphics have a dark tone and retro style created with pixel art. It would be easier if you just auto picked up items when you reached them. You should add more abilities and items.

[FEAR ASSESSMENT]

Creepy test flash. Graphically it ranges from different colors and some spooky images. This felt like a test you would be forced to take in school. There was no fun or entertainment. You just follow instructions over and over. The loud noises and flashing lights were annoying.

Also, why did you write reviews in the Author Comments?

[At Water's End]

Puzzle path maker flash. Graphics are good enough to tell things apart. You need to mark the ending, that way the player knows how to finish the level. You should add helpful hints in case the player is confused on how to advance.

AkvatGames responds:

Thank you for playing and for the feedback! I’ll make sure the ending gate is marked out to better show the player where to go, and look into a hint system (which should also expand easily into a tutorial system!) Thank you again for playing!

[Orphan]

Visual novel. There are some graphics. This is mostly just reading a visual novel, so you will either love or hate it.

[MudGate]

RPG adventure flash. Graphics remind me of Minecraft. Gameplay was decent, but there should be a much larger armory. You should remove the email and password requirements to play on NewGrounds. That would make it easier to jump into the fun.

mudgate responds:

There is no requirement to register; feel free to play anonymously

[SPUNK VS THE NEIGHBORHOOD KIDS]

Action shooter scratch. Shooting the kid does not lower this green health bar. The bar seems to lower at a random time. You need to be able to duck or hide to avoid getting shot. Adding some corrections would make this scratch better.

LG-studios responds:

thanks for the idea

[Tricycle Racing X]

Tricycle racing flash. Graphics are nice but could use special effects. You have to go full speed if you want any chance of trying to win. You could try adding power ups to make the game easier for the player.

[Just some buttons...]

Spam game. There are five boxes and four of them have a one time animation. There is really no gameplay or content at all.

TopyHet responds:

Hey dont judge me, its my first game alright?