DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Therindal Hack 'n Slash]

Action flash. The game screen is too large for the screen size. You cannot view everything at once. Graphics are colorful but could look more professional. Listing the controls in the author comments would be a good idea.

[Assw]

Platformer submission. The graphics are low quality from the little stick man figure to the undefined green blocks. You'll need to flesh out the main character and make the green box much more detailed. The game is only one screen long, and yes you can travel of the screen. You need to make more screens.

[Barrel Smasher]

Car themed flash. Graphics are rough and need some polishing up. Gameplay is trying to collect barrels, and you die if you hit an explosive barrel. You should be able to use your score to purchase unlockables and upgrades.

[Talking Dumb]

Body simulation flash. The graphics are recorded scenes that are awkward and goofy. I am going to guess that it is the author that was recorded. You should add meters, so we can tell how well our buddy is doing. Including more actions would also be helpful.

[xoxol shooter]

Shooter themed flash. Your game area is so small compared to the giant amount of gray nothingness. You should make this game area much larger. The background area is a cat sleeping and when you press restart It changes to other pictures. You should really use your own art to create custom backgrounds.

[Matteria]

Clicker gadget. The game size is way too small, and you should make it a standard screen size. All you do is click and score increases. There is nothing to purchase or lock at all. This is just too basic the count as a game.

[My Talking Yoshi]

Yoshi themed pet simulation. The Yoshi Sprite that has been taken from Nintendo. There are four different categories that you have to keep track of to make your pet happy. If you can add original artwork and animation Yoshi would look improved.

BBgunfan1997 responds:

It’s a png.

[Sonic: The Pandora Disc (FLASH EDITION)]

Creepypasta remake. Graphics are sprites taken from Sonic games. You should use your own artwork and create your own characters. This is a remake so there is nothing new or exciting. You should try to increase your level of creepiness and scare factor.

NogginStudio responds:

Like I said in the description, the game has limits, I'll try to improve it in the executable version

[шутер]

Action shooter demo. The graphics on the hand looked like a very early version of Wolfenstein. The green enemies really need to be fleshed out. You should add more weapon choices and different upgrades to collect.

[Nova Miner V1.32]

This is a miner simulation flash. The graphics look nice, and you could definitely tell everything apart. Gameplay offers different choices and variety. It takes about 30 minutes to finish which is fair for a game. And when you add more updates that will increase the overall enjoyment.

HolyYam227 responds:

Thank You! honestly I'm just an 11 year old trying to spread my coding skills more! Soon I am going to release a game called YamJam, It's planned to be a just shapes and beats style rhythm game, the songs include music made by me, Shirobon, Meganeko, Preds, and Creo!