DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sonic: The Pandora Disc (FLASH EDITION)]

Creepypasta remake. Graphics are sprites taken from Sonic games. You should use your own artwork and create your own characters. This is a remake so there is nothing new or exciting. You should try to increase your level of creepiness and scare factor.

NogginStudio responds:

Like I said in the description, the game has limits, I'll try to improve it in the executable version

[шутер]

Action shooter demo. The graphics on the hand looked like a very early version of Wolfenstein. The green enemies really need to be fleshed out. You should add more weapon choices and different upgrades to collect.

[Nova Miner V1.32]

This is a miner simulation flash. The graphics look nice, and you could definitely tell everything apart. Gameplay offers different choices and variety. It takes about 30 minutes to finish which is fair for a game. And when you add more updates that will increase the overall enjoyment.

HolyYam227 responds:

Thank You! honestly I'm just an 11 year old trying to spread my coding skills more! Soon I am going to release a game called YamJam, It's planned to be a just shapes and beats style rhythm game, the songs include music made by me, Shirobon, Meganeko, Preds, and Creo!

[clicker boss]

This is less than a clicker demo. The graphics are a premade cat sprite so there is no originality. All you do is put the cat. There are no other options at all.

Pepewinxo responds:

im a starter developer, it's a constructive opinion, i apreciate that

[nario preview {zx spectrum style}]

Platformer preview. Graphics are low quality and low attention to detail. The screen auto scrolls sometimes without the main character. The game does not last long enough.

voptik123 responds:

graphics is low bcs look at the title theres some words "zx spectrum style" theres old computer that popular in uk bcs it small money need to pay and bcs that the computer have vry bad graphic

[HELP THE GIRL 2 (USK 12)]

Platformer demo. The graphics could use a higher level of detail and better visuals. Gameplay lasts maybe five seconds, and you walk to the boy. Game length needs to be longer and contain more content.

[The Magic 8 Ball]

Magic 8 ball gadget. Graphics are very rough, and they need to be polished so they can look professional. The biggest issue here is you have to refresh the entire game just ask another question.

[Smiler's Adventures 1]

Platformer demo. The main character is a circle with a bare white background. The same screen is recycled several times with the graphics disappearing. The controls are left and right arrows.
There is no plot. I reached the last screen that recycled over eight times.

If you added colors and polished up the graphics, and added a plot this demo could improve.

[FhornMaster!]

The screen of the game is too large for the screen size, and you cannot see everything. The only button I can see is Exit. I know I type this often, but you need to put your controls in the Author Comments. You also include instructions, so the player knows what to do.

ThaiEnglishGamer responds:

Yeah sorry the game in this platform is currently Broken at this point but it the good version is currently on ITCH . io and Thank you very much for the comment and i currently trying to fix them!

[Discophrenia Dungeon Crawler - The Quest for Hendrick's Gin]

Dungeon crawling flash. Graphics are very simple and basic. The controls are all about point and click. You should allow the controls to be reconfigurable. That way you can allow arrows to control the directions you are walking. With hard work, this could be much better.

carbonlad responds:

Youre not wrong; thanks for the feedback (I need a new working laptop keyboard)