DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Smiler's Adventures 1]

Platformer demo. The main character is a circle with a bare white background. The same screen is recycled several times with the graphics disappearing. The controls are left and right arrows.
There is no plot. I reached the last screen that recycled over eight times.

If you added colors and polished up the graphics, and added a plot this demo could improve.

[FhornMaster!]

The screen of the game is too large for the screen size, and you cannot see everything. The only button I can see is Exit. I know I type this often, but you need to put your controls in the Author Comments. You also include instructions, so the player knows what to do.

ThaiEnglishGamer responds:

Yeah sorry the game in this platform is currently Broken at this point but it the good version is currently on ITCH . io and Thank you very much for the comment and i currently trying to fix them!

[Discophrenia Dungeon Crawler - The Quest for Hendrick's Gin]

Dungeon crawling flash. Graphics are very simple and basic. The controls are all about point and click. You should allow the controls to be reconfigurable. That way you can allow arrows to control the directions you are walking. With hard work, this could be much better.

carbonlad responds:

Youre not wrong; thanks for the feedback (I need a new working laptop keyboard)

[vende telefonos para ganar dinero]

Spam clicker demo. Graphics are very low quality. You need better visuals and polish them to perfection. It says to click the target, but it did not register my clicks. This game needs to be in English. With many hours of work and effort, this might be an okay flash.

[Megaman vs Quint]

Mega man themed flash. The graphics are mostly mega man sprites, so there could be lots of original art. You should put your controls in the authors comments. There is only one major fight and the game ends. The game length needs to be longer and more have more robot battles.

[WiggiDefense]

Asteroid themed flash. Graphics have an outer space theme and a dark tone. Gameplay is made difficult due to having the charge of the gun in the gun being so weak. The gun needs to start off stronger and you should add upgrades as you go.

[total boats the games]

Boat themed demo. The graphics are bright and vivid. Only the Episodes button works, and it takes you to three episodes. Episode one takes you to an unfinished level where you can't complete it. If you can get all the buttons to function and complete the levels, this demo could be a real flash.

[7afani ABP [DEMO]]

Puzzle demo. Graphics are cute and colorful. Controls are point and click. Gameplay is very simple, and I completed the puzzle easily. You should add medium puzzles and then hard ones after you finish the easy puzzles. With more puzzles and an awesome ending this demo could be improved.

arabiclore responds:

yeah that’s the whole point of endless reader games like this… they are just simple kids games for kids to learn sight words. and yes, i must admit, this demo has a LOT of problems, as some words are even wrong, because the creator of the conlang (laters) made a mistake in telling me the words for game, and some english translations were wrong. but the whole point is that it is easy, and for kids.

[Rudiments]

Drumming themed flash. Graphics of the notes look similar to the background. You should change the background color, so the notes are easier to see. If you added bonus content it would give the player more variety.

[>> Musik Marathon <<]

Avoider themed flash. Graphics are basic, but it works well enough. Gameplay can use rhythm to help you advance, or you can turn off the music. It would be nice if you had more options and different types of content to play.