DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Turbo Heavy Metal Spirit]

Turbo Heavy Metal Spirit is a racing flash. Controls could use a way to reconfigure your keys. There should be better ways to attack and upgrades to your speed. It needs a good story with an actual ending.

[Armor Dude]

Armor Dude has much potential but does not execute it well. Gameplay suffers from being repetitive. You should include more weapons, skills, tactics, and special moves. You should also explain how everything works.

[Pumpkin Yard]

Pumpkin Yard is a flash where you have to smash the evil pumpkins. Gameplay is hurt by the fact that you slide around too much. If you added a shop that would allow purchase of upgrades, power ups, and new attacks that the replay factor would increase.

[Stitched Santa!]

Stitched Santa! is a shooting flash. Graphics just seem off and have a strange dark tone. Gameplay could use a more steady pace. You should include power ups for improvement.

[Tank Attack V0.00002]

Tank Attack is just a demo. Graphics could be flashier and more polished. Gameplay should be faster and need much more content. This game could be better once it is finished.

[Step By Step Tutorial(05)]

Step By Step Tutorial (05) is a collection of tutorials that would be helpful to those new at flash. It is currently messy looking, and desperately needs to be organized. That would help it to look more professional.

[How to draw 3: Birds]

How to draw 3: Birds is a tutorial all about drawing birds. If you added more instructions and different bird types to draw than this could be better.

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Thanks! Please note this is nearly 20 years old lol

[LR Interactive 1.1]

LR Interactive 1.1 is a flash featuring Mario characters. Gameplay suffers from a second or two of delay. If you could correct the delay than this game could be Top Notch.

[Killbox By JLI]

Killbox By JLI has great graphics, and that is the best part of this flash. Controls are loose and need to be tighter. You should check your spelling, grammar, and a beta tester could help.