DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Step By Step Tutorial(05)]

Step By Step Tutorial (05) is a collection of tutorials that would be helpful to those new at flash. It is currently messy looking, and desperately needs to be organized. That would help it to look more professional.

[How to draw 3: Birds]

How to draw 3: Birds is a tutorial all about drawing birds. If you added more instructions and different bird types to draw than this could be better.

Aprime responds:

Thanks! Please note this is nearly 20 years old lol

[LR Interactive 1.1]

LR Interactive 1.1 is a flash featuring Mario characters. Gameplay suffers from a second or two of delay. If you could correct the delay than this game could be Top Notch.

[Killbox By JLI]

Killbox By JLI has great graphics, and that is the best part of this flash. Controls are loose and need to be tighter. You should check your spelling, grammar, and a beta tester could help.

[Waterfall Leap]

Waterfall Leap has some good looking graphics. Gameplay can be fun depending on how quickly you want to proceed. If you included more levels and content then this game would improve.

[Containment by Chambers]

Containment by Chambers is not a movie or a game, it is an art piece. There is little to no Gameplay at all. It would need more content and goals to accomplishment.

[SMW X-treme v2]

SMW X-treme v2 is a game that features Mario characters. Gameplay would benefit from a slow, normal, and fast settings. That would help players build up their skills.

This game was made on 11/23/05, and I am only the twelfth person to review it.

[Pong Mania]

Pong Mania is basically an imitation of the game Pong. Graphics look good, but there is nothing new or exciting in this flash.

[Star Collector]

Star Collector is a simple flash and the graphics are decent. Gameplay gets repetitive and needs more content. That would also help the replay factor. Adding music would be helpful.

[Joey the Kidd LevelEditor]

Joey the Kidd Level Editor is pretty much a demo. Graphics need more attention to detail and polish. You should do a better game explaining how the flash works.