DoctorStrongbad's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Toy Story 2 Reanimated Collab - Scene 258]

The graphics look similar to the actual movie, but slightly off. The animation flowed well enough without any issue. It is nice for a short trailer. I look forward to seeing the longer submission with lots more comedy.

JMations98 responds:

Thanks for the feedback

[School: The Movie]

School is okay, but the people are the worst. Doing school online is definitely the way to go. Animation flows well enough, and the art is average. You could use more attention to detail on the people. The gun at the end is funny. It should be longer and have more comedy making fun of school.

LilDrawingboi responds:

If you read the description, you can see that that was originally the idea. The problem was that I got tired of working on this and it just wasn't that good, so I cut it short.

[Penny: The Savvy Saleswoman! (of fire hazards) - Adventure Course Saga]

The animation was very smooth and the graphics were top notch. Plenty of comedy and humor, but the best part was all of the fire. I would not buy a house or anything else from her.

Ackari responds:

aa thank you! lmao that's fair-

[Magic Match-Up!]

Animation was slick, and had no slips up. The art style was basic, but it worked well enough. Content was okay, but there could of been so many more magic tricks. Music was average. With more effort this video could of been truly amazing.

yourrealcruise responds:

I appreciate the feedback. I'll work on improving my future animations.

[Friday Night Funkin' DUM ENDING]

Animation tries to recreate the Friday Night Funkin' style. I have never been a fan of the blank white background. It sorely needs color and decorations to lively things up. The comedy was okay, but why is this so short? There is so much material to parody, so this feels so shallow and unfulfilling.

gamergavin responds:

bro im new with animate ok

[The Power Of Prayer]

The animation is fair. Details could be better, especially on the man's face. Colors are bland and washed out. Perhaps, it was done that way to emphasize the light beam. Religion is a tricky subject for satire. You never know who might take the joke the wrong way.

Michael-T-Scott responds:

The beautiful thing here is that you put more thought into this than I did. Kudos! I give your review 4.5 stars.

[TD-Begging for Change]

Your webcomic isn't really animated, but for the sake of argument, it's close enough. This is all about art. Your art style looks simple but still has good a detailed quality. I found this to be very hilarious.

Raziberry responds:

Thanks, I try

[The Final Mar10 Day]

The animation was shaky, and it really needs to be smoothed out. Colors are a bit dull, which was disappointing. The background was just bare white. It really needs at least to be colored, if not decorated in typic Mario fashion. Happy Super Mario Day.

SnesB responds:

I appreciate your feedback. Tbh, I technically didn't intend on animating it. I used a similar animation method that I used for the Sam Nestar Pilot, which was closer to a motion comic.

I rushed out this video in less than a day so I could have it ready for March 10th lol

[It's Mario or whatever (mario day 2021)]

The Mario stick puppets are nifty. It reminds me of Claymation, but it is not stop motion at all. It is silly and has some quality comedic parts. Having a nice background would of made it loon much better. You should probably play at least one Mario game soon. Happy Mario Day 2021.

duffosaur responds:

thanks for this feedback i think i might remake it in animation instead and see if thats any better and after a few videos i might try and animate all of stupid ideas like this instead, your comment has affected me for the good

[Melon Drum]

Animation was short and sweet. A little walking and one big smacking. Going black and white was an interesting choice. It would look much better with some vibrant colors. Turning all red after getting hit. Nice work on the meme.

JCaluger responds:

Love the critique