The animation was very smooth and the graphics were top notch. Plenty of comedy and humor, but the best part was all of the fire. I would not buy a house or anything else from her.
The animation was very smooth and the graphics were top notch. Plenty of comedy and humor, but the best part was all of the fire. I would not buy a house or anything else from her.
aa thank you! lmao that's fair-
Animation was slick, and had no slips up. The art style was basic, but it worked well enough. Content was okay, but there could of been so many more magic tricks. Music was average. With more effort this video could of been truly amazing.
I appreciate the feedback. I'll work on improving my future animations.
The animation is fair. Details could be better, especially on the man's face. Colors are bland and washed out. Perhaps, it was done that way to emphasize the light beam. Religion is a tricky subject for satire. You never know who might take the joke the wrong way.
The beautiful thing here is that you put more thought into this than I did. Kudos! I give your review 4.5 stars.
Your webcomic isn't really animated, but for the sake of argument, it's close enough. This is all about art. Your art style looks simple but still has good a detailed quality. I found this to be very hilarious.
Thanks, I try
The animation was shaky, and it really needs to be smoothed out. Colors are a bit dull, which was disappointing. The background was just bare white. It really needs at least to be colored, if not decorated in typic Mario fashion. Happy Super Mario Day.
I appreciate your feedback. Tbh, I technically didn't intend on animating it. I used a similar animation method that I used for the Sam Nestar Pilot, which was closer to a motion comic.
I rushed out this video in less than a day so I could have it ready for March 10th lol
The Mario stick puppets are nifty. It reminds me of Claymation, but it is not stop motion at all. It is silly and has some quality comedic parts. Having a nice background would of made it loon much better. You should probably play at least one Mario game soon. Happy Mario Day 2021.
thanks for this feedback i think i might remake it in animation instead and see if thats any better and after a few videos i might try and animate all of stupid ideas like this instead, your comment has affected me for the good
Animation was short and sweet. A little walking and one big smacking. Going black and white was an interesting choice. It would look much better with some vibrant colors. Turning all red after getting hit. Nice work on the meme.
Love the critique
This is an interesting style, and it worked very well. The fluid motion really shows why it was so awarded and recognized. This film makes me want to check out more foreign submissions, even if I don't understand the language.
Thanks a lot for the good words here, I really appreciate it! Since this film doesn't have dialogues it is safe to say it is pretty much Internationnal actually!
So many bright and vibrant colors, that helped bring the characters to life. No issues with the animation at all. Comedy could of used more humor. Nice job.
Thanks for watching!!
I love most video game parody movies and I'm trying to earn my way to the top. :)
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