You really explained quitting and its bad effects well. The animation was okay, but could of been smoother. The biggest issue was the lack of color. Using bright and vivid colors would of been a wonderful idea.
You really explained quitting and its bad effects well. The animation was okay, but could of been smoother. The biggest issue was the lack of color. Using bright and vivid colors would of been a wonderful idea.
I gotcha! I'm still experimenting with the style, in order to speed up my production time. Thank you for your feed back! I gotta another one in the works right now, and i'm glad I took a sec to come back and look at comments. After seeing this and Peregrinus's notes, i'm gonna add the splashes of color, and add more frame work to my animations. The next video will be out soon.
The animation flows well from one scene to the next. The roommates are all unique and really detailed. Plenty of weed related humor and comedy. It makes you think twice about drugs and what can happen if you take them. Nice job.
Thanks!
Poking fun of the news and current events will always be topical and funny. Your animation flows very well. Next time, you should start the comedy earlier. That will help get the viewers hooked right away. Nice work.
Yep! Totally. Gotta get right to the silly.
The combination of Luffy, from One Piece, and the classic Super Mario Bros game comes together nicely. Luffy could be more detailed and have better movement animation. Not bad for a short parody movie.
thank you. it was my first time with legs moments , i would work on it next time, don't forget it have pokemon as well :)
The parrot is drawn well and has some nice details. His hair was the best part. It needs more comedy and humor. Make it much longer with plenty of content and you will be on your way to success.
These are only a few frames from our cartoon. But I think these frames could be published as independent joke since the parrot looks like Travolta and Trump at the same time.
We are working on "pets on their own" cartoon. It tooks a lot of time as it's only a hobby and we make it in free time. =)
These frames will be present in first episode of "Pets on Their Own". =)
We will publish here this cartoons as soon as it will be ready.
You also may check some trailer on our YouTube, if you want. Our chanel name is "Peven Factory"
Thanks =)
Jake got more than he bargained for when he got a plant from the store. The humor was a little silly, but was still funny. The plant was the star, but the car driving badly was nice comedy. Great job.
Thanks man, been working on this for 2.5 months and kind of feel like it was worth it with all this positive feedback :D
Is this your first animation? If so, you did a nice job. The animation could flow better and the stick figures would look better fleshed out. The red blood really stands out.
Doctor Strongbad! Thanks man, I'm working on a sequel right now, this is my 3rd animation :) I'm a huge fan by the way, I love your stuff man from all the way back in 2007 :) <3
That dark colors help to make it feel gloomy and lonely. The rain towards the end was a nice effect. Smooth animation and an interesting plot. Is this the beginning of a series?
I hope it does! I definitely have more ideas for this setting!
I love most video game parody movies and I'm trying to earn my way to the top. :)
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