DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[By the Blueprint]

Falling puzzle flash. The screen size feels cramped, it should be much larger. This feels like Tetris, so it's not the most original gameplay.

Man-o-Valor responds:

The screen size is cramped because I made this with Scratch ;^)

[Space Cow Milk PC/Mobile]

Puzzle themed flash. The graphics are colorful and have detail. Controls can take a few seconds to master. Gameplay can get repetitive after a few levels. Adding unlockables could increase the replay factor.

[2 colors game]

Action platformer. Graphics are just black and white. You should really add bright and vibrant colors to make everything look better. This feels very much like Super Mario Brothers. You should add an attack to kill the monsters, Mario's fireball would be helpful.

[Play My Level! v0.2.3]

Hop and bob platformer flash. Controls should be reconfigurable, especially the double jump. It should be performed by pressing the jump button twice. All levels should be able to be finished.

Tymski responds:

There is no double jump in this game. All levels can be finished, it's just not easy. The game is in development. This is version 0.2.3, I'm gonna do reconfigurable controls in the future.

[The Great Sus Fight]

Action platformer demo. Character and monsters are all within a box. The box should be removed so things look more realistic. Monsters can push you too easily and attack you. With better visuals and less pushing attacks this demo could be better.

Yura11105 responds:

Sus now doesn't push you out of the box.

[Be Safe With Me]

Visual novel. Graphics are okay but it needs more animation. The skip feature would work better if you added an auto skip feature.

[Little Adventure Tale 0.5962]

Card building flash. Graphics look well enough to tell everything apart. Gameplay is all about using cards on enemies. You should make it easier to regain health. I almost died after fighting four battles in a row just to arrive at the first town. With some work, this game could become Top Notch.

TheOilyGooseStudio responds:

Hopefully 1 day top notch thx for playing!

[Triangling]

Matching puzzle. Graphics are average and need special effects. The concept of matching a shape to the moving lines seems okay, but actually doing it can be challenging. You should make the lines move slower and have the counter to 20 seconds.

[2D Zombie Survival]

Run and gun shooter. The stickman main character really needs to be fleshed out. The plain green ground needs some designs or trees. You should have a score of how many zombies you kill. You could use that score to purchase upgrades and better guns.

Wreaker404 responds:

All good and valid suggestions, I will add in the next update

[2P KiraKira Oishii Maro]

Collecting flash. The game is all about collecting snow against a second player. This game would work better if the computer played the second player. It would also work better with a single player mode.

8slobonmyknob8 responds:

Yes I'm going to eventually make a 1P one with a storymode and bots, this is 2P Kirakira Oishii Maro which is why I put 2P in the name because it's supposed to be played with two people