DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[My pocket Pissino (old version)]

Piss themed minigame. Graphics look sloppy and rushed. The graphics need to be polished to look more professional. There should be more content and goals to achieve. Next time, you should submit something new and not an old version.

Piss5556 responds:

Meh new version is better

[Food Fight Fiesta: Multi-Use Cards]

Strategy themed demo. Graphics are colorful and detailed. Gameplay could be streamlined with the moving mechanic. Why does it cost a card to move? You should just move naturally and only use cards to attack. With work this demo could become Top Notch.

chefchris responds:

Hey DoctorStrongbad,

Thanks for the constructive Feedback, I indeed put alot of effort into the Game.
To answer your question, I wanted to not distinguish between monster card/spell card like in traditional TCG, hence tried to combine both moving cards and attack cards into one type of cards.

The advantage of doing so is that there will be no dead card in hands, every card can be used flexible as moving, attack, or block, although there is no narrative reason for moving you correctly pointed out.

Beside this mechanic, what other things would you say can improve the gameplay?

Best
Chef

[Bloodlust: Santa Monica]

Demake of Vampire The Masquerade Bloodlines. The screen is way too small, and it needs to be much larger. That way you can see everything better. This has potential to be much longer and lot more content. Will you be updating this game?

emontero responds:

Thanks a lot for your feedback! Yes, I'm already working on the next update😊

[Loona's Flight(UNFINISHED/WIP)]

Vertical flight WIP. Graphics need more than just a light blue blank background and the main character sprite still has a white border. There is no ending. You should make a decent ending screen.

Curejulio responds:

Hello,thanks for the feedback!
This wasn't supossed to be released in first instance,since as you pointed out it's very unpolished(my coding skills are not very good).
However I'm working on an improved version that fixes all the problems you said and will add background music

[Tindahan Simulator]

Sim job demo. Graphics are color and use pixel art. This game is incredibly short. One customer asked me for one item. I gave it to him and the game ended. You should make the game longer and you should have plenty of different actions.

RebbelTV23 responds:

The game ending is a bug! Sorry bout' that! The game is endless and customers appear every 10 seconds.

[Space liberators_Alpha]

Spaceship shooting alpha. Graphics are low quality and there is only a small moon in the black background. When the enemies shoot you in space, you take no damage. Gameplay can get repetitive quickly.

[DB: PATHS]

Choose the path demo. Graphics look like a picture, and the animation is choppy. Your visuals need to look more artistic, and your animation should be smoother. All you do is pick left or right. The game moves so slowly, so you should remove all of the lag.

[Load ng...]

Action Platformer Graphics are just black and white, and really need vibrant colors. The main character is just a lower case i. You should make him a humanoid figure. When you die, you should be able to press the R key to restart.

[The Door Game]

Door themed demo. Graphics are basic, and they need to look more professional. All you do is click the door. There should be several door choices. That way it is more interactive if you can earn points. You could add a way to save your high score.