DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[gun fly]

Fly shooting demo. Graphics are simple and they could be polished to look more professional. Gameplay is just clicking the one fly and he appears again. You should have more than one fly on the screen at one time. You should use your " ponots " to purchase upgrades.

Levymiguel123 responds:

I'm sorry in the future I might make a remake of gun fly

[Pico On Shit (DEMO)]

Pico themed flash. The screen should be made into the standard size. The text is too small, and you should make it larger so we can read it. Graphics could look more professional.

S0MKAY responds:

I Also Hate This One, This Is Just Fucking Shit,Even Is A Perody And Made In Flash 5... not Really Good
And Also, You Can Just FullScreen Or Something :/

[What's your Zodiac Sign]

Zodiac sign gadget. This is just a small gadget to find out a person's zodiac sign. If you added this as a minigame to a completed flash than it could be useful.

EvilSnow responds:

well, it is one of my first successful flash games (or gadgets as you say). if you think so, can you tell me to which full flash game can I add it? plus, even if this is a gadget 0,5 star is a bit too low.

[Pico On Shit (Last Demo)]

Pico themed demo. Graphics are low quality, and they need to look professional. The broken boss fight really stalls out the gameplay. With lots of hard work and effort, this could have a chance to be better.

S0MKAY responds:

Is A Perody, And Is Made Flash MX, And Not Really Good At Action Script, C'mon Dude Just Think A Little Bit

Also BTW Stop Watching "A" Rated Stuff

[Escape from Amogus (BETA V2.6)]

Platformer beta. The graphics are inspired from Amogus the mobile game. Gameplay is average as you just walk and jump. You might want to offer an English version of your Author Comments. With more content and objects this beta could improve.

Brenozuh responds:

:( I understood your criticisms and I will try to improve (If it's written something wrong or meaningless, I used Google Translate sorry)

[Don't Play with Fire]

Arson themed flash. Graphics are inspired by Darnell Plays. Gameplay is just point and clicking the objects flying towards you. You could add a score board so players could complete against each other.

Mugsyman303 responds:

Good Idea thank you for the comment! and it's supposed to be simple

[El Roca]

This is a submission that ends in a few seconds. There is almost no game play at all. You could try adding more levels and objectives to accomplish.

Michael-13 responds:

Okay.

[Fingerball Subzero]

Soccer themed demo. Graphics are low quality, and it desperately needs more animation. You should add clear and concise instructions. Putting all the controls in the Author's Comments would also be helpful.

rrJava responds:

Try this: https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/975335