DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[My Talking Yoshi]

Yoshi themed pet simulation. The Yoshi Sprite that has been taken from Nintendo. There are four different categories that you have to keep track of to make your pet happy. If you can add original artwork and animation Yoshi would look improved.

BBgunfan1997 responds:

It’s a png.

[Sonic: The Pandora Disc (FLASH EDITION)]

Creepypasta remake. Graphics are sprites taken from Sonic games. You should use your own artwork and create your own characters. This is a remake so there is nothing new or exciting. You should try to increase your level of creepiness and scare factor.

NogginStudio responds:

Like I said in the description, the game has limits, I'll try to improve it in the executable version

[clicker boss]

This is less than a clicker demo. The graphics are a premade cat sprite so there is no originality. All you do is put the cat. There are no other options at all.

Pepewinxo responds:

im a starter developer, it's a constructive opinion, i apreciate that

[nario preview {zx spectrum style}]

Platformer preview. Graphics are low quality and low attention to detail. The screen auto scrolls sometimes without the main character. The game does not last long enough.

voptik123 responds:

graphics is low bcs look at the title theres some words "zx spectrum style" theres old computer that popular in uk bcs it small money need to pay and bcs that the computer have vry bad graphic

[FhornMaster!]

The screen of the game is too large for the screen size, and you cannot see everything. The only button I can see is Exit. I know I type this often, but you need to put your controls in the Author Comments. You also include instructions, so the player knows what to do.

ThaiEnglishGamer responds:

Yeah sorry the game in this platform is currently Broken at this point but it the good version is currently on ITCH . io and Thank you very much for the comment and i currently trying to fix them!

[Discophrenia Dungeon Crawler - The Quest for Hendrick's Gin]

Dungeon crawling flash. Graphics are very simple and basic. The controls are all about point and click. You should allow the controls to be reconfigurable. That way you can allow arrows to control the directions you are walking. With hard work, this could be much better.

carbonlad responds:

Youre not wrong; thanks for the feedback (I need a new working laptop keyboard)

[L'odyssée du Petit Bonhomme Moche ~ DEMO]

Action platformer demo. Graphics are bland and the main character is a stick figure placeholder. You really need to improve your visual quality. Adding a double jump is useful in any platforming game.

MegaAnimatedCartoons responds:

I see you didn't notice the game is intentionally ugly and badly done 🥲
In truth, the game is inspired by "La terrible mésaventure du Petit Bonhomme Moche" (in English "The terrible misadventure of the Little Ugly Guy"), a spoof animation in which lots of misadventures happen to a little ugly stickman !
Everything is voluntary ! 🤣

[gun fly]

Fly shooting demo. Graphics are simple and they could be polished to look more professional. Gameplay is just clicking the one fly and he appears again. You should have more than one fly on the screen at one time. You should use your " ponots " to purchase upgrades.

Levymiguel123 responds:

I'm sorry in the future I might make a remake of gun fly