DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[San_Watsaku ft. Lillian Pontefract]

Visual Novel flash. There are colorful graphics, but no animation. There is plenty of words to read if you are into reading. Adding animation would make the visual novel more interesting.

RosieUV responds:

What do you mean? There very much is animation. The bottom square is animated to match what is written. Unless maybe the scenes don't play properly on your device but I haven't heard any issues with that...

Also this is made in Godot, not flash.

[Ban Zero10Y7 REMIX 2 V2]

Platformer spam demo. Graphics and mostly black and white with some colored in ban hammers. The bare white background needs clouds and a sun or something. The cursor has the same sprite as the main character which is just confusing. This demo needs lots of work to be better.

GatocDev responds:

Ok
I will update the demo
Edit:New update :) & thx for your feedback every comment helps me to make my games better

[Ceaseless Castle]

Action platformer WIP. Characters are too small. They need to be larger or zoomed closer to the screen. Controls take a few tries to figure out. I ended up changing the controls. This has potential with the metroidvania formula.

FocusedPhoenixGames responds:

I could zoom the camera in a bit, but it might make it more difficult to see the enemies and do the platforming.

[Game about poco x3 pro]

Simulation demo. Graphics are decent enough to tell everything apart. I had no idea what was happening because this game is not in English. You should add an English translation.

tari111 responds:

Yes, you are right, but I don’t know how to make translations, plus I was targeting a Russian audience.

but I will try to do it in English, and perhaps there will be another version (Game about poco x3 pro "EN").

THANK YOU FOR YOUR UNDERSTANDING AND FOR YOUR COMMENT

[Runners' Grave]

Maze themed flash. Graphics show off different colors on various levels. Gameplay was going okay until you introduced the sword. You should have a little tutorial that explains how to use the sword properly.

SeptagonStudios responds:

Thank you for your feedback. The sword introduction may need some work.

[MINECRAFT TOWER DEFENSE: EPIX EDITION!!]

Minecraft themed spam. Graphics are decent but needs some razzle dazzle. Gameplay is clicking blocks on the side of the road and fighting off monsters all while running. When it becomes nighttime, you should explain how to build things and what the things do. The difficulty is too high. It needs to be lowered, so the player gets a feel for the mechanics.

BimbusTimbus responds:

Bowsette is on her knees, and has her mouth ready. She has a really large chest, with a cute little Princess tattoo. The gray background is empty and bare. However, you can't takes your eyes off of her.