DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Great Sus Fight]

Action platformer demo. Character and monsters are all within a box. The box should be removed so things look more realistic. Monsters can push you too easily and attack you. With better visuals and less pushing attacks this demo could be better.

Yura11105 responds:

Sus now doesn't push you out of the box.

[Little Adventure Tale 0.5972]

Card building flash. Graphics look well enough to tell everything apart. Gameplay is all about using cards on enemies. You should make it easier to regain health. I almost died after fighting four battles in a row just to arrive at the first town. With some work, this game could become Top Notch.

TheOilyGooseStudio responds:

Hopefully 1 day top notch thx for playing!

[2D Zombie Survival]

Run and gun shooter. The stickman main character really needs to be fleshed out. The plain green ground needs some designs or trees. You should have a score of how many zombies you kill. You could use that score to purchase upgrades and better guns.

Wreaker404 responds:

All good and valid suggestions, I will add in the next update

[2P KiraKira Oishii Maro]

Collecting flash. The game is all about collecting snow against a second player. This game would work better if the computer played the second player. It would also work better with a single player mode.

8slobonmyknob8 responds:

Yes I'm going to eventually make a 1P one with a storymode and bots, this is 2P Kirakira Oishii Maro which is why I put 2P in the name because it's supposed to be played with two people

[Topazowy Golem: The Ring Of Hell]

Action themed demo. Graphics are decent enough. I did not like the slippery controls at all. You should be able to explore different rooms. It was frustrating killing the same robot over and over in the same room. You should add power ups and a way to get your health back.

TopazowyGolem responds:

Alright, thanks for your opinion. I will try and do these stuff in the next update (hopefully)

[scary kid's adventure]

Kid adventure flash. The graphics are sloppy and rushed. You should take your time and give the visuals' more effort. Gameplay suffers from slowdown. If you removed all of the lag, then this flash could be improved.

Gamemaster127 responds:

the bad grafics are intentional also slowdown could depend on the device ur using curently it only works on windows but i plan to make a mac vesion sometime soon

[Mighty Boy Runners Demo]

Auto scrolling demo. Graphics are average, but you should add some razzle dazzle to spice it up. You should add a pause button. The demo should save your progress as well.

mightywolf123 responds:

I'm just one person working on the game, I'm sorry if there's no "razzle dazzle", I'm trying. You also can pause the game, just press Enter. And this is meant to be a arcade style game, the point is to see how far you can get.

[Anonimus!]

Adventure demo. The stick figure main character should be fleshed out. The graphics need to be more professional. The controls stick on the menu seems odd. Movement should be performed by using the arrow keys. The entire demo is in Russian. You need to have an English translation.

ConUnUN responds:

Bro, this game is a joke, it's supposed to be like that

[The Leaderboard Experiment]

This is just a basic clicker flash. The background needs more than just a blank white wall. The gimmick here is that it's a Leaderboard Experient, which is okay. However, you should really change the requirement to earn the medal. Currently, you are just encouraging players to auto click to ridiculous numbers like 686,853. The medal should be something fair like 100 clicks, so every player can earn it.

WaspVentMan responds:

That is a fair criticism, I made this in like 3 hours, because it really was just an experiment, I wanted to see how far people would go to get to the top of a leaderboard (and a medal).

I am planning on adding extra medals for daily/weekly/monthly/yearly top of the leaderboard, as well as a few visual changes, such as customisable buttons and backgrounds, however, it’s not my fault that someone decided to click a stupid number of times, blame them, not me.

[Ryno Rush]

Run and gun flash. The graphics are nice, and the hero reminds me of Rhino from Spider-man comics and movies. The starting enemies should be weaker, or your gun should be stronger. Adding more upgrades or power ups would be a great idea. You should also add ways to get your health back.

Bobandy11 responds:

Thanks!
I had thought about adding more weapons or pickups, but i decided to keep it simple in the end.
And there are actually ways to regain health, they're mostly hidden in secrets but there are a few health pickups in open locations on the second and third level.