DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Built to Scale]

Visual novel about a business. It has some pictures, but it needs animation. If you like to read, then this might be the flash for you.

remarkablegames responds:

Thanks for the review. This game was made in less than 4 days for a game jam so unfortunately we didn't have that much time to polish the game and make it perfect.

[Atmospherics]

Soundboard gadget. Zero graphics and animation. It just plays sounds. This gadget needs animations that demonstrate the sounds being played.

mr-dreich responds:

Thanks for checking Atmospherics out!

I did not know the animation for sounds playing was broken for Web, i created this primarily for the mobile market and put in on the web for free. I will try and get that fixed.

Thank you for the feedback!

[Number Blunder]

Number themed puzzle. No graphics at all just text and numbers. It is a basic number sorting puzzle. If you added graphics and animation it would improve.

mr-dreich responds:

Thanks for you feedback! I wanted this to be as simple as I could possibly make it so I did not include any graphics other than simple UI.

[IGNIS-figuras de linguagem]

No idea what is going on in this game. Nothing is in English. You are floating in space while letters and numbers fly pass you. NewGrounds is an English website, you need to have everything in English.

Gustavoshark responds:

This is a Portuguese assignment from my school, Of course it won't be in English, the game description says that the game was not made for NewGrounds users.

[At Water's End]

Puzzle path maker flash. Graphics are good enough to tell things apart. You need to mark the ending, that way the player knows how to finish the level. You should add helpful hints in case the player is confused on how to advance.

AkvatGames responds:

Thank you for playing and for the feedback! I’ll make sure the ending gate is marked out to better show the player where to go, and look into a hint system (which should also expand easily into a tutorial system!) Thank you again for playing!

[MudGate]

RPG adventure flash. Graphics remind me of Minecraft. Gameplay was decent, but there should be a much larger armory. You should remove the email and password requirements to play on NewGrounds. That would make it easier to jump into the fun.

mudgate responds:

There is no requirement to register; feel free to play anonymously

[SPUNK VS THE NEIGHBORHOOD KIDS]

Action shooter scratch. Shooting the kid does not lower this green health bar. The bar seems to lower at a random time. You need to be able to duck or hide to avoid getting shot. Adding some corrections would make this scratch better.

LG-studios responds:

thanks for the idea

[Just some buttons...]

Spam game. There are five boxes and four of them have a one time animation. There is really no gameplay or content at all.

TopyHet responds:

Hey dont judge me, its my first game alright?

[Lumber Jam]

Sim job flash. Graphics are okay but need polishing up. Gameplay is cutting down trees to build houses. It seems like a wood themed version of Minecraft, but with less choices. Add more options and ways to be creative for improvement.

RebbelTV23 responds:

Yeah i wanted to add more options to this game anyway! Thanks for the feed back :3