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[Gravity Storm - First Mission (DEMO 2)]

Action platformer flash. Graphics are nice and bright. Gameplay was fun. It could use plenty of power ups and upgrades. Once you add more levels and bonus content, this demo might become Top Notch.

Jampley-Dev responds:

Demo 2 is out here, and on Steam if you want to wishlist the full game: https://store.steampowered.com/app/3482870/Gravity_Storm__First_Mission/

[Miniwar (Demo) 2 update]

Action demo. Graphics are okay, but the main character needs color. If you made the " super jump " pressing up twice, that would work out better. If you added more weapons and attacks, this demo could be better.

Spar60Half responds:

Demo 3 is on the way, which brings several new features and I promise that it will be better than demo 2.

[PolyBlast V1]

Graphics have that Satr Fox look from way back on the SNES. You should add a tutorial to explain how to shoot and fully explain the plot.

Doglover2012 responds:

I was about to add a tutorial on the description but I found out that New grounds doesn't have descriptions...

[BER Hunt]

Graphics are sloppy and rushed. You should take your time and polish your visuals up to look professional. Adding your controls to the Author Comments is always helpful to players.

fartyboy250 responds:

It’s supposed to look rushed and unprofessional, also the game doesnt even work lol

[Chicken Chaser GYWP]

Action collecting flash. Graphics are decent enough but could use some major razzle dazzle. It has a basic minigame feel. It does have potential to be evolved into a larger experience.

GamesThatYouWanaPlay responds:

Thank you for the respond, i have an Itch.io page, i put the game up there as well, you can download an better quality version if you want it.(Itch.io name Nitram1234)

[Bread 2: Breakfast Runner]

Endless runner with a breakfast twist. I experienced slowdown throughout the gameplay. If you could speed everything up, then this game would be more fun.

RCPython responds:

Thanks for the feedback!

[Ricky Bobby Soundboard]

Sound board featuring Ricky Bobby. Graphics are nine buttons and a picture as a background. Including animation would be excellent. You need many more than just nine clips.

Mondayzz93 responds:

Yeah, you're right. I honestly was trying to get down the hardcore basics of flash. A problem of mine is I see my page on NG to me a museum of the things I make instead of things in proud of and want to show people. I'm trying to get better at animation and hopefully I'll take your advise to heart and make a second one of these with all of the things you said in mind.

[Control A Town 4!!]

Town controlling themed flash. Graphics are good enough to tell everything apart. Allowing the controls to be reconfigurable would be helpful. You should include a detailed tutorial that explains how to play and what to do.

John4eyes responds:

Sounds like a good idea

[Vtuber Clicker 2 Final Season]

Pet sim flash. Graphics are colorful and the pets are detailed. Gameplay is all about clicking over and over. You should include a way to click faster to make progression easier.

lastmiau responds:

that is the goal of the video game, to be simple and relaxing 👍 that's why i added the gold bonus to make it faster

[MARMELADE]

Visual novel flash. Graphics are pretty much just red, black, and grey. Adding brighter colors would make things look more vivid. If you like to read than this might be the flash for you.

ezd responds:

The limited palette was a design choice we made to give the game a precise look! Sorry to hear you didn't appreciate it, I understand it isn't everyone's jam (pun intended)