DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shoot Drake Simulator]

Celebrity killing demo. Graphics are a picture of a Waffle House and Drake. You press Spacebar and the game ends. You need more levels and various weapons. You should be able to chase celebrities around before you murder them.

MetalTreadwell responds:

Maybe someday I will make this game a reality.

[Spread, Spread]

Platformer flash. The use of only black and white really limits the graphics. It desperately needs vibrant colors. The controls would work better if they were reconfigurable in case you are left or right handed. You should offer easy, medium, and hard modes. That would help newer players to explore your game without worrying about difficulty.

YassinDev responds:

thanks for your suggestions , i really appreciate it

[Adventure Row]

Deck building flash. Graphics are decent enough to tell all of the cards apart. Gameplay is complicated by confusing rules. The tutorial offers a sample game but does not explain any gameplay. It is difficult to play a game without being shown how to play.

WTMK-BK responds:

The goal is to get to level 10.
You play cards in the Hand area for effects.
Complete quests to level up.
Use coin to buy things for your deck and damage to kill things in the row.
Monsters in the row will attack at the end of you turn.
Cards cycle each turn 1 at a time left to right.

[Momema Mini]

Matching puzzle flash. Graphics have the standard retro look, but the creatures could be larger and easier to see. Gameplay has a timed issue. You should have more time on each creature. Especially, when you first start off. You can take off more time as you advance levels.

wijowi responds:

Thanks for the feedback. I’m definitely still working on getting the timing right. Will also see about creature size. 👍
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posted an update this morning, changed speed on first two levels and adjusted sprite size...will keep at it.

[[MSSE] - Mac Sound Startup Evolution]

Mac sim soundboard app. Graphics are low quality. You should add better visuals and tons of animations. For a soundboard, there are not enough options. You need to add many more sounds.

LaciaStudio responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I will listen to you.

[Bridge Fight!]

Avoider and clicker flash. The graphics are colorful, and you can tell everything apart. Gameplay is a little bit confusing because it starts off as just being a simple avoider. Then a clicker ability is added where you click to have a higher number than the boss. The instructions were a little confusing. If you explained everything better and remove the clicker ability this game will improve.

acoastgame responds:

Thanks for taking your time to give your feedback on this game.

thanks alot.

[My Talking Yoshi]

Yoshi themed pet simulation. The Yoshi Sprite that has been taken from Nintendo. There are four different categories that you have to keep track of to make your pet happy. If you can add original artwork and animation Yoshi would look improved.

BBgunfan1997 responds:

It’s a png.

[Sonic: The Pandora Disc (FLASH EDITION)]

Creepypasta remake. Graphics are sprites taken from Sonic games. You should use your own artwork and create your own characters. This is a remake so there is nothing new or exciting. You should try to increase your level of creepiness and scare factor.

NogginStudio responds:

Like I said in the description, the game has limits, I'll try to improve it in the executable version

[clicker boss]

This is less than a clicker demo. The graphics are a premade cat sprite so there is no originality. All you do is put the cat. There are no other options at all.

Pepewinxo responds:

im a starter developer, it's a constructive opinion, i apreciate that