DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[BER Hunt]

Graphics are sloppy and rushed. You should take your time and polish your visuals up to look professional. Adding your controls to the Author Comments is always helpful to players.

fartyboy250 responds:

It’s supposed to look rushed and unprofessional, also the game doesnt even work lol

[Chicken Chaser GYWP]

Action collecting flash. Graphics are decent enough but could use some major razzle dazzle. It has a basic minigame feel. It does have potential to be evolved into a larger experience.

GamesThatYouWanaPlay responds:

Thank you for the respond, i have an Itch.io page, i put the game up there as well, you can download an better quality version if you want it.(Itch.io name Nitram1234)

[Bread 2: Breakfast Runner]

Endless runner with a breakfast twist. I experienced slowdown throughout the gameplay. If you could speed everything up, then this game would be more fun.

RCPython responds:

Thanks for the feedback!

[Ricky Bobby Soundboard]

Sound board featuring Ricky Bobby. Graphics are nine buttons and a picture as a background. Including animation would be excellent. You need many more than just nine clips.

Mondayzz93 responds:

Yeah, you're right. I honestly was trying to get down the hardcore basics of flash. A problem of mine is I see my page on NG to me a museum of the things I make instead of things in proud of and want to show people. I'm trying to get better at animation and hopefully I'll take your advise to heart and make a second one of these with all of the things you said in mind.

[Control A Town 4!!]

Town controlling themed flash. Graphics are good enough to tell everything apart. Allowing the controls to be reconfigurable would be helpful. You should include a detailed tutorial that explains how to play and what to do.

John4eyes responds:

Sounds like a good idea

[Vtuber Clicker 2 Final Season]

Pet sim flash. Graphics are colorful and the pets are detailed. Gameplay is all about clicking over and over. You should include a way to click faster to make progression easier.

lastmiau responds:

that is the goal of the video game, to be simple and relaxing 👍 that's why i added the gold bonus to make it faster

[MARMELADE]

Visual novel flash. Graphics are pretty much just red, black, and grey. Adding brighter colors would make things look more vivid. If you like to read than this might be the flash for you.

ezd responds:

The limited palette was a design choice we made to give the game a precise look! Sorry to hear you didn't appreciate it, I understand it isn't everyone's jam (pun intended)

[cool]

Spam flash. The graphics include Mario and Goomba sprites. Jumping works well enough. You should add fireballs so you can attack the goombas.

WelftheCube responds:

omg its freaking strongbad

[Anti Ivan: Love Story]

It's a fighting and romance game mixed together. The graphics were okay, but the visuals could be improved. There is potential to make this game larger and more exciting.

rinluxor responds:

why 1 star :(

[Thought Of War: WWII]

Memory card flash. Graphics are just red and green cards and a white background. Memory is more fun with pictures. You should find a way to include pictures and animation to this game.

SNIPER-61385 responds:

I made this in under 72 hours for a contest. If you were an indie game dev, you would understand how hard games are to make. If you looked at the the tags with your eyes instead of your hollow brain, you would see it was made it HTML5.