DoctorStrongbad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[My pocket Pissino (old version)]

Piss themed minigame. Graphics look sloppy and rushed. The graphics need to be polished to look more professional. There should be more content and goals to achieve. Next time, you should submit something new and not an old version.

Piss5556 responds:

Meh new version is better

[Food Fight Fiesta: Multi-Use Cards]

Strategy themed demo. Graphics are colorful and detailed. Gameplay could be streamlined with the moving mechanic. Why does it cost a card to move? You should just move naturally and only use cards to attack. With work this demo could become Top Notch.

chefchris responds:

Hey DoctorStrongbad,

Thanks for the constructive Feedback, I indeed put alot of effort into the Game.
To answer your question, I wanted to not distinguish between monster card/spell card like in traditional TCG, hence tried to combine both moving cards and attack cards into one type of cards.

The advantage of doing so is that there will be no dead card in hands, every card can be used flexible as moving, attack, or block, although there is no narrative reason for moving you correctly pointed out.

Beside this mechanic, what other things would you say can improve the gameplay?

Best
Chef

[Bloodlust: Santa Monica]

Demake of Vampire The Masquerade Bloodlines. The screen is way too small, and it needs to be much larger. That way you can see everything better. This has potential to be much longer and lot more content. Will you be updating this game?

emontero responds:

Thanks a lot for your feedback! Yes, I'm already working on the next update😊

[Loona's Flight(UNFINISHED/WIP)]

Vertical flight WIP. Graphics need more than just a light blue blank background and the main character sprite still has a white border. There is no ending. You should make a decent ending screen.

Curejulio responds:

Hello,thanks for the feedback!
This wasn't supossed to be released in first instance,since as you pointed out it's very unpolished(my coding skills are not very good).
However I'm working on an improved version that fixes all the problems you said and will add background music

[Tindahan Simulator]

Sim job demo. Graphics are color and use pixel art. This game is incredibly short. One customer asked me for one item. I gave it to him and the game ended. You should make the game longer and you should have plenty of different actions.

RebbelTV23 responds:

The game ending is a bug! Sorry bout' that! The game is endless and customers appear every 10 seconds.

[run to fortnite jonesy from jamal's fart: the game]

Spam flash. Graphics are decent enough to tell everything apart. You press space to go from the top screen to the bottom one and back. When you get a game over, you should add a replay button.

BimbusTimbus responds:

Bowsette is on her knees, and has her mouth ready. She has a really large chest, with a cute little Princess tattoo. The gray background is empty and bare. However, you can't takes your eyes off of her.

[retarded glaggle massacre]

Spam flash. You just move your mouse around killing bubbles. After you kill 120 bubbles the game ends. the ending needs to be animated, and not just a picture. You should make more levels and add some unlockables as your progress.

WelftheCube responds:

they are not bubbles, they are BUBBAS.

[SAP]

Rogue like flash. Graphics show off the forest with plenty of greens. The night and day mechanic does a nice job of going from brightness to darkness. Gameplay starts off a little fast with bugs creeping all over. You should tone things down when your first start. That would give the player a chance to get comfortable with the gameplay.

FLAME130 responds:

Thank you for the feedback! I am working hard to improve the player experience. A new update should be out soon! Thanks for playing!

[Potato Head]

Change the face flash. Graphics are colorful but could use more polish to look professional. This game is short. After you finish working on Potato head, there should be more levels. Each level should have its own goals to achieve.

pixelqube responds:

I made the game for a game jam in about 3 days. I just released a new update where every time you play the goal is different.